i cant critisize that which is amazing

hmmm reinstating the D.A. nice move. Splitting it in two, also a wise move. just one question... who's Head Boy?

ILG

i can tell already this is going to be good... type fast please

It kind of seemed like his proposal was too quick and rushed. I feel like the entire story could be just that much better if you forced yourself to slow down or at least go back afterwards and add more to it.

Awesome! i like that you made draco come back and he is a bit more human. this will be interesting. the ginny/hermione tension was very good too. and hermione should be intimidated by her, she is one powerful witch. update soon.

this is a good story. the feeling that the characters feel are much more real than in some of the others i have read :) well done :)

i think you could also write another chapter for this.

OMG the DA! I absolutely cannot wait for more to be written! Please don't take too long!

Oh goodness this chapter is absolutely wonderful! Your word flow is astounding. I eagerly look forward to reading chapter 2!

The tables have been turned on Harry here. Having to adjust to a normal life, as normal as can be. Teasing me with the new headmaster wanting the D. A. reformed. Loved it.

wow , the last bit made me go all teary, i loved your story because it actually made sense for harry to feel like this,

well done

love it

next chapter please x

Nice idea and I liked how you let Ginny comfort Harry during his depression. Thanks for writing.

It was nice. I like the way you let Ginny comfort him. He needs someone that will fulfill that role for him. He was always the one to do that for everyone else, and as someone who does that I can unequivocally state that we need a comforter sometimes.

Great start, keep it going.

Sharptooth

i hope u continue with this story

i think its really good