Holy crap I couldn’t even make it past the second paragraph. Your grammar needs a lot of work, and the rapid fire POV changes are a poor narrative choice.

This is so bad. And Fuu does not have large breasts. And large breasts are not a criteria for choosing someone to love. You're a vulgar, bastard with no social life.

Really fucking stupid

Whoa, please if you are going to write about the civilian council (which doesn't even exist in canon) write them without exaggeration and bashing. And Naruto is the village's main weapon. Konoha is a military dictatorship and the Hokage is the one in power. Tsunade, with her strength, power, temper and influence as the Senju heiress would just give them the middle finger if they try to hurt Naruto and sentence them to death. Yes, she has that power. Shocking, right? Homura and Utatane are her advisors and she never even listened to them most of the time. So why would she listen to a bunch of ordinary humans who don't even have the power to fight for thei village? And Hiashi and the other clan heads would surely have a fit if she dis that

I don't know what you are planning but the only surviving Uzumakis shown in the manga/anime were Karin, Nagato and Naruto. Nagato is dead so that leaves Karin and Naruto. The other Uzumakis are either dead or scattered all around. I don't that they have the power to fight against a small village.

During the training scene with Kakashi and Naruto, why would he even apologize for priotizing Sasuke during the Chuunin Exams? He did the right thing because Sasuke was against Gaara, who was unstable and dangerous back then and almost killed Lee. Sasuke must be strong enough to survive against an opponent who wanted to kill him and strong enough to do so. And while he was an asshole, Neji would never kill Naruto and Naruto's needed to work on the basics, and Ebisu was the right teacher on that. So no, Kakashi has no reason to apologize to Narutp because aside from the Chuunin Exams, I see no scenes of him prioritizing and playing favorites with Sasuke. And if he hadn't ask Ebisu to train Naruto, the two of them would have never met Jiraiya and Naruto would have never trained with him.

the seven tails is a rhino beetle not a dragonfly -.-

Plleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaasss keep going with this fanfic

I give it 5 out of 3 stars make more of Naruto and Fuu

you should make another chapter

Omg Hinata-Sama is going to be devastated that Naruto likes Fu and not Hinata-Sama this is totally unacceptableeeeee! That is if I cared what Hinata thinks NaruHina r.i.p XP

Awesome! Make the next chapter already!

ohhhhhhh my god this is so fucking awesome i hope you update soon

Amazing o_o

When's the next chapter?!

continue

Please make an update it's a good story.