are you going to continue?

wow.

this was really moving. and powerful. and amazing. and very well-written.

great job! (:

Ooh that was creepy. I loved it. I love how trusting she was of him and how he took advantage of her. I was a bit afraid that it was going to turn into a Tom-rescues-Ginny-and-sweeps-her-off-her-feet sort of story but, thankfully, you proved me wrong. Beautiful job!

X Ever Yours, Lauren Nicole, authoress

its so sad...and very nicely written:)

omg. So so sad. But excellent.

ok that was nice, im nto tryign to be rude but that left a little off, maybe give some flash backs of memories, just soem backround info abotu who things went int he chamber of secrets, somthign to help us get an idea of hwo wrong harry was abotu what supposedly happened.

Interesting..

That was well written but I didn't like it it was so unrealistic because we didn't hear what she thought, what she was wearing, how the room looked or what the bed was like or what size. I think you have talent but you need to work on discriving the story. Good luck.

wow...huge twist of events. nice!

Lovely. Dark and wonderful.

-paradox

that is so sad! it was so good! ohh more of tom/ginny! lolz

Once again, marvelous work! I love it, absolutely love it!

I find no fault with the plot and think you kept Gin and Tom incredibly in character.

Lovely work, Absolutely brilliant!

omg...thats so good? how did u learn to write like that?

Finally a story where the good side didn win! Yay! Loved it. Iz it gonna be 1 chap, though? Where's the rest. No constructive criticism. This story is fanftastic.

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YAY! I felt like I could hug you until you suffocate after I read this! I loved this! Ever so much! *Twirls and dances* Well, I disliked the apparentness of Ginny and Harry being an item...but I loved this one. This one was good. Very good. No changes needed, needless to say. _ Burn, baby, burn! {Sorry, experiencing yet another long put-off caffiene buzz}