I like it. You have drawn their relationship very well, and given it depth. Congratulations.
Flinch

I was so scared this was going to be a sad story, but it wasnt :D Thank you for that -.-;

Wonderful, it makes me a bit jelly tho xD

awwwwww! That was so sweet! I've got tears in my eyes! The way you describe Remus' love for Sirius is just so amazing! You're brilliant!

This. Was. Absolutely. Fantastic.

That is what I have to say about that xD It's really gorgeous and I loved it a lot 3

It made me all happy and I was all giddy after reading it 333

gah! 3

LyssaLaughable xD

oh, this was beautiful.

(beautiful should be in bold and italics, because this story was that amazing).

can you like, marry me, now?

This is so cute! I love it, and very much agree with that pairing! It's really really good, very sweet and very realistic. What else can I say? It's fantastic!

CKC :)

this really good! you get the emotions just right, and Remus has just the right voice, if you know what I mean. great job!

This is GREAT

Two words dear lady: utterly amazing! ]

cool but what's the point?

Wow. Just ... wow.

This is utterly amazing and I can't even put to words how much I love it ('A lot' doesn't even begin to cover it, by the way). The description is fantastic and the vocabulary is brilliant. The structure and the storyline is amazing. Merlin, I love it SO. DAMN. MUCH.

Favouriting it, without a doubt!

Oh, this is BEAUTIFUL!

I just... I'm knocked speechless.

Remus' description of Sirius is just so beautiful. You can feel the love in it. I love how you describe Sirius at the end and how Remus only feels him instead of the moon.

I just... I can't even say anything. I love it. I love it. Amazing. Amazing. :)

Yes, I like this very much. It’s a beautiful description of Sirius as seen through the eyes of love – Remus’s eyes. There are a few mistakes which I think are because of writing quickly and not checking it thoroughly – “pray” should be “prayer”, “Avada Kedavra” spelled wrongly, “as we sit together in the common room together,” – a together too many. But these are things experience will put right. Your vision of the characters, especially Sirius, is excellent and I hope you will write more.

nice job... you wrote a great first person. yay fluff

THIS IS YOUR FIRST STORY? Good lord, its hundreds of times better than anything I could write. Im having trouble believing its your first story. Its fantastic, exactly how I think of Remus and Sirius.