COME ON YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE THIS HERE! I WANNA SEE A PROMPT WHERE THE ALTERNATE TRIO MEETS THE ORIGINAL CRISIS SEFFIE CUZ I LOVE ANGST THAT IS RESOLVE THROUGH FLUFF AND YOU WRITE FLUFF SPLENDIDLY CUZ IT'S NOT TOO MUCH BUT PERFECT

That started out so cute then went straight to crack. Good job, I was crying.

Holy crap man! I almost cried . There are tears in my eyes! They haven't fallen but damn my head hurts with how much I want to cry but isn't. Holy... man TOO MUCH .

Reading this fanfic was like gaining a part of your family- one who would have to see the consequences, the nightmare unfurl out and just...

it's so sad. and painful. please update.
poor seffie, for the broken future.

anyhow, the writing is nice, some occasional typo-
the happy days are interesting also..

but i'm a little time-line confused.

but ultimately, lovely work.
well done.
please update when possible.

Chapter 10 mad me cry...

Whaaaaaaa!

Even if the morrow is barren of promises, nothing shall forestall my return.

This story is just, wow. I have to say everything about it I loved. It really caught me as I was reading the summary, and I'm glad that I read it all the way through. It was such a delight in having to read every bit and sucking in all that was in it. I hope you continue to finish this; it was such a nice read and I'm begging for more!

Its been so long welcome back.

this chapter is very entertaining!
i love the ff5 refrence you used in this chapter. great job :D

omg this is my fave chapter so far!
i love how you use zack as the groom!
amazing job on this, keep up the great work.

this is great so far :D
you got the character of angeal spot on XD
and i love the ending, i didn't even see it coming

I LOVE IT i have to say awesome story i cry in some of chapters i just could hold it and can a chapter were they are together agin in the afterlife

This story is too precious; like in my previous review, i love the bond of all three men(and big brother Zack) and this adorable wee little girl

I was shocked when i read that Sephiroth was her real father, the irony! But the fact he still is her uncle/mom figure and knows he is not ready for fatherhood and acknowledges his friend's success in raising a cute and sweet girl made me feel all warm inside w also like the cameos of other final fantasy people as kids (not gonna lie, i was hoping to see a little Yuna:3 -who at this age would have no mother or father)

I hope also to see this story continue, but don;t let Seffie grow up so fast please, she's too cute and sweet, also hope she gets her father's cooking skills and not her uncle Genesis' XD and maybe some cute fanart of this little cutie and her dad, i feel all warm and fuzzy!

One more thing: will Angeal find a lady? will she be a FF cameo or made up lady? o3o or will he be a young bachelor father? part of me wants him to find a lady interest and the other part thinks all he needs is his little girl

This is the cutest story I have ever read. The bond betwween Angeal and his new and adorable daughter, and how sweet and polite she is, and very smart for her age, also her cuteness growing on her uncles. I can only imagine how cute it would be to see her and Zack playing hide and seek or just him talking to her, its adorable, so adorable it makes me "aww" every time she does something like hug her uncles legs becuase shes so short or calling Angeal "Papa"
I picture Angeal a father and a damn good one, also the nightmare chapter was too good- having it believe it was really a time skip and seeing how emotional he got seeing his daughter get married off to none other his cute but quirky student XD priceless
Its late so i'm going to have to read this later but I love it, cutest and sweetest story i have read so far on here.

This has been a huge pleasure to read! I look forward to more interactions with Seffie and her family, as rag tag as it is. They way you've written the characters has given them a depth that I haven't seen in fanfiction for a while and I love you for it. Way to go! I really can't wait to read more. The Original Crisis spin offs have been a pleasure to read as well. Although they do bring tears to my eyes, they are wonderful. Thank you.

OMG you just updated. I love this series so much!