wow ! THIS IS GREAT! You are a awesome writer!

I like your story but could you please go back to putting the whole story into paragraphs instead of one big blob? It's hard to read and I always get lost, as I said I like the story but I won't continue to read it if you keep writing the chapters like this.

please update soon. pretty please with sugar on top!

I'm fascinated by this story, I'm totally addicted to it

you have such a talent for writing that your stories are simply incredible

I am fan of merder but I love this drama that is in your story

Update soon, please!

Could you put the story into paragraphs like you did on the first couple chapters? It's really hard to read all jumbled together and it makes people not want to read it.

it was very good and very realistic, in a way maybe meredith don't want a children with derek because he was no the man of her life. first she is not cut to be a mother. she like too much her job, she had no real mother , and she is the woman man always look at because of the look, the way she like sex too much and she is broken. but mark is the same , he is not cut to be a father or be in a relationship, he is a play boy even if he don't want it, woman trow at him, he is very good looking, very clever, has more money than he need, is sarcastic, and a bad boy a mortal combinaison for a woman . and he is also broken. they are perfect for each other, they don't expect the other to change but just accept them for what they are. derek don't see that but he love meredith but always end hurting her, he didn't pay attention to her, he is possessive but don't take care of her, he cheat on her, lie to her and expect her to understand, in fact maybe she know he will always be jealous of her love for the child. mark is not a kind man, he can be cruel, he is tough because people hurt him so he can be a force to be reckoned, so derek try to make him feel shamebecause he don't want to lose her. continue it's good.

Another brilliant update! cant wait for more!

J

Oh good grief. I seriously wish you would do the real Merder fans a favor and leave them out of your twisted ridiculous freak fics. Don't you have your own fic board? How about you take your nasty Addek crap there. Your storylines are absolutely absurd and ridiculous and most of all immature. Please do the Merder fans a favor and leave them alone. Take your nastiness and buggar off. I hate your writing. You are a wretched nasty woman and need to leave Merder alone. LMAO, seriously Mark and Yang?

wow now this is interesting. i sort of love it lol it's messed up. the fact that derek is pulling away and even agreeing to do that with addison and not tell her is insane. i'm mad at the both of them. i'm hurt for meredith. is it wrong that i sort of want her to still be with derek? lol he's such an ass though but mark is too and i'm afraid mark would hurt her just as bad. maybe...if derek continues to be an ass i wont root for mer/der but if derek is suddenly super mcdreamy...i'd have a hard time seeing mer going to mark. but then a part of me wants her to! lol i guess i just don't want it to be mer's fault you know? i don't want her to be the reason their marriage ends (if it does) i want it to be all derek.

I love this fic - cant wait for more!

J

bum bum bum! More soon please!

yeay you're back!

still like your story! thankx for the update

i love mark and meredith together!

woah! intense! I had forgotten about the fact that Mark and Christina are married in this one! cool. Keep writing and posting!

I like this!

I'm interested on how the story will continue - cant wait for Dereks and Christina's explanations!

Bring on Mer and Mark.

Cant wait for next update!

regards

J

VERY GOOD I ALWAYS SEE MARK AND MEREDITH TOGETHER they a similar but in a way different. they understand each other they dont wait for people to change they accept people like they are. they like sex and don't deny it or are in shame with it. they like their job, they are passionate don't care what people think of them, are incredibly beautiful, sexy an clever without even trying. he like money, power and good surgery, she like surgery, her friend even if she doesn't understand them. they are perfect for each can be tough rough and crul when he want to, she can be insensitive if she want to. they don't do what people do or what people expect of them. continue it's good