Wow! It was hotter than hot!

Wow

WhoA!

This was lovely, true to the characters and realistic as well.

the lack of communication and verbal consent turned me acquisition in their place disturbs me to no end.
the writing style was good but the line of sensuality was pretty irksome.

Hm... Was a bit confused with the modern language in a regency setting.

Never got to the smut, because I got totally turned off by mrs. Bennet's advice to resist nothing. To hear an appalling statement like that in a story written in modern English was a major turn off. I know women back then were more or less the property of first their fathers and then their husbands, so the statement was probably quite authentic for the regency era, and sadly enough if the story was written in a more old fashioned language, I would probably not have noticed it.

Just imagine a mother these days saying something as outrageous to their daughters, it is actually a really sad thought.

Very good!

Beautiful. Absolutely fantastic smut! Sensual, sexy, and tasteful all at once! *applauds*

I loved this story.

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Passages

Perhaps I am wrong, but he acted too quickly for his new bride. I think he would have tempered his excitment and slowed down to give her more pleasure before taking his own.

Good job

wow! that was beautiful. loved it. it almost didn't seem like smut. lol. keep going girl. your writing is ammmmaaazzziiinnng. All the love.

This was spectacular. The way you wrote this passage was utterly perfect and a great representation of what would happen on the night of their wedding.

One thing... on the 4th to last paragraph, in the second to last sentence, it's "were", not "wear". :)

Spectacular job, keep writing masterpieces.