I'm weirdly obsessed with this fix. I don't know why but something about it feels really relatable to me and I don't know who I relate to more, Abby or Connor. Anywho, I wanted you to know I've read it, like, three times.

This was really beautiful. It really resonated with me. Thank you for writing and sharing this! Absolutely wonderful writing!

I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to read this. It was painful, but you wrote out what would most certainly have happened after losing Cutter and Stephen. Connor is a sensitive soul and it's not surprising that he'd break down and Abby, bless her, managed to control herself so she could be there for him. Remarkable with a beautiful ending. Amazing.

The fact that I read every sentence, every word -listened to the punctuation even- makes this story so unique purely genius. I typically skim through most stories, or at least read it quite quickly but with this, I couldn't. It grabs from the start with that tinge of confusion that so many people fail at using and before the first paragraph it's hooks are in my blood so much I couldn't stop.

The emotion was intense and real, building and building. The variety of the tone, the length of paragraphs...even the places they visited were echoes of his mind. I honestly wouldn't be able to find a single aspect that seemed wrong, and wouldn't even try if I was asked.

Simply brilliant: I don't have ant more words to describe it.

This was an amazing story! I'm new to the Primeval fanfic, just kind of scouting out the Connor and Abby stories, and yours is the best by far. Thanks so much for writing this. :)

Hello Alyseci5,

I have just found your story Prelude in C Minor. I believe that this is my favorite Primeval story. So heart breaking and yet up lifting. Of course Conner would have a nervous break down. And the way you showed Abby showing her love.

Thanks

Diana

Once again, this is just lovely. Thank you.

OK with this one I seriously think you may have become on of my fave authors on this site.. it was so painfully genuine.. jsut so so well done.. honestly I have no idea what else to say bout this..

Well this was just fantastic. I'm a new addition to the fandom (as in, I've only seen about half of the whole series, most of it today) so a few things I'm a little confused over, but this story is just amazing. I love the language, the dreamy kind of quality this fic has. I've always, always wished I could write like this and I haven't got it yet.

I really cannot say enough good things about this story. I wish I could say more.

nicely written, lovely story. Really great job going through the process of Connor's depression and Abby staying by his side as long as it takes! I felt sorry for him that he thinks he'll be responsible for the end of humanity, I've been wondering if that will come up at all in season 4. Very in character, another great Primeval fic from you!

Oh Angst with happy endings, will you forever be my weakness lol? Really great job. Ever since the episode where Conner says "Not again, not again" I just felt so terrible for him. He really has lost so many people he cares about and to think you might bring down the entire human race? That's heavy stuff.

what a wonderful, amazing journey out of depression

you are incredible

That is so adorable! Which is a weird word to use for something so angsty, but it was in a way. Abby and Connor are love. :D I probably shouldn't have read this yet considering I've sort of bookended the series so far - saw the last few, saw the first few, but haven't seen anything of the middle yet, meaning I've never even seen season 2. But I knew that most of the characters died anyway, so that's not ruined. Anyway ... I thought the way you took Connor through the process of grieving and worry about the machine Helen had and his fear and all was brilliant. It felt natural for him to recover at that pace, and the road trip of his and Abby's was a nice metaphor and just amazingly written. Ok, I'm all done gushing now. Great story, and I'm going to go check out your page in the hopes you've written more Connor/Abby stories, and if not, I hope you do again.

This really is my favorite Primeval fic that I've read so far.

It's so good. All the emotions are there, its just brilliant.

The way you word some of the sentences stick with you, which is something you don't see very often with fanfics.

So brilliant!

Bravo! Aching, heart-wrenching and most importantly beautifully written. Loved it, thanks!