Reviews for When The Dove Cries
galaadrielle chapter 14 . 3/15/2019
noooooooooooooo T.T t.t T.T
ClumsyWrighter chapter 9 . 12/1/2014
i... am comfiused now T-T
Anonymous Reader chapter 14 . 7/11/2014
Despite the grammar mistakes (which got consistently better as the story progressed), I really liked this story. It was well thought out and I enjoyed reading it. Barrett's backstory was also very good. The only thing I'm disappointed with is the ending. It did almost make me cry, but I hate sad endings. I'm especially upset that they won't even get to be together in the afterlife. That's just unfair. So, aside from the ending, it was a great story.
Profe chapter 14 . 6/13/2014
this story
i cant
it literally gave me life then TOOK IT AWAY AND LEFT ME DEAD
i love it so much dear god
Fritillaria Vajra chapter 3 . 1/14/2011
OMEGA! he staying in Kyle's home, this soo interesting! i've been looking fic like this!
Rainbow-Raptor chapter 14 . 1/4/2011
oh my god that's sad TT_TT and an unfinished cliffy~~~ D':
Serenity Uzimatsu chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Amazing. I nearly cried when I finished this and I really liked the ending.
FeliceMemoria chapter 14 . 9/1/2010
Now well, I actually DID cry. Oh gosh. Kyle whyyy QnQ/333

*sobs*

I really enjoyed the story and stuff, and hate Zenuka with a burning passion. Your OCs are well made and the background stories believable.

All in all, an almost perfect story... but still, oh gosh the ending TT_TT;;;
Temari101 chapter 14 . 4/18/2010
I almost cried reading this D:

Great story.
Temari101 chapter 13 . 4/18/2010
I love your story Cassie! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Pineapplecat chapter 10 . 1/24/2010
Wow, I'm totally in love with this story. Your plot is really amazing and a joy to read. The only recommendation I have is to be careful with spelling, there were quite a few mistakes. I love reading it though, and I can't wait for the next update!
MrMissMrs Random chapter 7 . 12/14/2009
YAY!

happy

Favorite Rune Factory Yoai pairing I believe now. XD
Deadsy Dreams chapter 6 . 12/10/2009
I'm enjoying your story. It's pretty good! Looking forward to the next chapter!