Love it but would love to read more

Very sad.

awesome sad story

You need to continue this story ! We need answers as much as Edward !

ahh i wanna know why too lol cute o/s

Well, that was really sad but I love that song so i had to read. I listen to their music a lot, great job. :)

I echo the reviewers who also love this song...and your story captures it so well. I could hear the melody run through my head as I read each word and as I read familiar phrases I could hear the singer so clearly. You did a great job of melding together two pop culture hits (one more well known than the other). Thanks.

Wow. Lots of emotion in such a short story. Very well done. I love this song, and I think that you've done it justice.

What? Wait... What? That was... what? I'm so confused. Was she cheating on him? What exactly was going on? I am SO confused.

this is one of my alltime favorite songs and ever since the first time i heard it i always thought wow..this would make a great fanfiction if only someone would write it..and i cant believe i found this! i was so excited. great job

I hate that I love this one shot. Heartbreaking ( poor Edward. bad Bella.

OH MY GOD - broke my damn heart!

-Q

BITCH! oh my god does anyone else want to stab bella? but really good story btw, i almost cried

this is just so sad.

This story intoxicates me, sencond time reading.

It's great!

What an awesome one shot! I am a complete lover of one shots, but usually I am left so unsatisfied cause I feel like they just don't get enough into it, but yours was AWESOME! It had everything. A beginning, middle, & an end. The good times and the sad times! Simply perfect! Off to read more! D

3 LynZ_Ann