Can you update this fic? Because i think your fic is different and interesting because it's follow 3 rules of fanfiction. You make a reasoning of sev not into Lily life make sense,because he feels Lily is better of without him, without knowing that the effect of his action is worse. In the end,Lily become alone and crave for recognition and greatness,so that she is not becoming "the weird Evans girl", but Lily evans, the brightest witch of her generation,who are recognized and have lot of friend. And the path she walk can become the dark path, because she is in slytherin and Voldemort always prefered his snake than lion or raven.
I think the relationship of severus and Lily Will go down the path of Naruto and Sasuke in pre shippuden. They Will broke up,because even thouh severus try to convince Lily to light, she is already blinded by his self hatred and thirst for recognition . In the end, i hope sad ending,but bitter ending

it would seem that this is a bit late to the party but i do hope you decided to continue this story, ive loved all of it so far and am sad that it is over. also would be interested in being a beta if you come back to it. Thanks for the read so far and hope to see more sometime.
Later Daze

It's very years late but can i make the challenge in ao3 ?

Very good story so far, hope you continue it sometime.

lol, sev's fudged up this timeline and now is playing the ignorant bystander to lily's self destruction, kinda shitty of him even if he doesnt realize it. he should have known better when she got sorted to slytherin tho and actually i know deep down he knows whats going on, so the idiotic martyr saviour thing is looking quiet selfish like 'if its not me, it's not my fault' rather than 'if its not me, then she wouldnt be hurt' which is shittier and much more stupid than i realized, if he was smarter about this, the least he could do was check up on her and see that she was actually alright every now and then

I really enjoy this fic. You are a fantastic writer.

Very interesting... too bad it's abandoned :/

THIS CHAPTER MADE ME BASH MY HEAD AGAINST THE TABLE. ARE YOU KIDDING ME. SNAPE IS IN HUFFLEPUFF? YEAH AND IM DONALD TRUMP!

I'm a Harry Potter fan or a magic fan myself. I must say this story is really good. A lot better than quite a few fan fictions about this I have seen.

Ohhhh, please keep this one going if you can! I just love the concept of a baby Slytherin Lily and the hilarity of Severus the Cranky Middle-Aged Hufflepuff.

I really can't wait until baby Lily lets slip that she's getting the "cupboard-under-the-stairs treatment" at home. That'll fry his sensibilities, probably make him start yelling. And oh, how I DO want to read that!

Ugggh I love your story please continue

Please continue

No wonder you only have a few reviews . Absolutely trash of a fic . What exactly are you doing ? Make someone relive his life and change nothing but swap snape for lily . In fact I hate your fic . What about Eileen and her ruthless interaction with Lily . That is so not elieen . FUCK YOU AND YOUR WRITING ! Read some SS/LE ships and maybe maybe you'll write better in the future.

Cmon man, to make such an amazing fic and not finish it its evil. Pls continue with this fix

i love snape stories and i love stories where charecters end up sorted in a different house this is great story i dont know if you are still updating it or but i would love absolutely love to read more of it.