I LOVED this! Now heading for Redemption (hope you finished it). Nice writing!

How come I can't find Redemption on the list of stories you've written on your profile?

I luv Toko! And this is such a cute example of how their friendship could of started. My ABSOLUTE favorite part was when she kiched him, and as he asked her qhy, she just looked like nothing wrong happened. She acted perfectly unphased by it. Hahaha

This was sooooo cute pls write more

That was so cute! I just love this. XD

Aishhh, your Toko fics are so cute! I can't wait to read all of them.

Zuko is so kind to Toph 33

I love this story and I wanted to Redemption but I couldn't find it (maybe it has been deleted? *gasp*)

Did you take Redemption off or something? Because I don't see it. I really want to read it since it's a Toko story. I like this one. Toph child side isn't shown very much. It's nice. :)

Love it! Ment to read redemtion first but couldn't find it. I like how you kind of made zuko/toph couply but without toph being OOC and it being to romancy (She's only 12!) LOVE YOUR STORIE'S!

Please Update!

Hello,

I loved this, your portrayal of Toph and Zuko was awesome please add more!

LDN

This was absolutely adorable. Now I'm off to read Redemption cause this story got me intensely interested.

Sooo cute tophs like a baby cuddling with it's mom and the fact that is with zuko make it SOOOOOOOO CUTEEE OMG FLUFF METER OFF THE SCaLEeeEeeEEE

This is Oh so scrumptiously cute.

I knew Zuko had a big bleeding heart- but I don't think he would be so comfortable with the sudden physical contact.

And hey, wait a sec, isn't it the dead middle of summer when this happens? Why is it so cold?

aw so cute Xd but katara was like a total beyotc o well adorable toko ness XD lolz

I was wondering what happened to this - keep it up, this "series" of this and Redemption are really the best Toko stories here, in my opinion.