Can you have Lance ask Danny where he lived before he died?
Danny is really bad at lying, but even he isn't stupid enough to admit that he lived in Amity Park (Lance Thunder already knows that he's a relatively new ghost, and is going to wonder who died recently in Amity Park that is anything like Danny).

Also, do Halfas have Obsessions in this story? Because Danny's devotion to protecting Amity Park makes a lot more sense as an Obsession. Maybe Halfas form without an Obsession and they develop an Obsession based on what they spend a lot of time thinking about it/ a lot of energy doing it/ a lot of emotion invested in it.
Danny starts protecting Amity Park because he thinks it's cool or because he feels guilty about getting the Ghost Portal to work, but he can't stop when the negative effects of prote ting Amity Park start sinking in because it is now his Obsession. The ghosts that attsck Amity Patk are threatening his Obsession, and they don't know it.

This was Beautiful. Thank you for writing this!

I can just imagine Tucker, Sam, and Jazz elsewhere just, "Oh my god, they LET HIM DRIVE!"

Shut the fuck up vlad

for the record "original slash cousin" and "original/cousin" have two very different meanings

Just binge read this whole fic and it’s really good! It hasn’t been updated in years but I really hope to see more chapters some day

I have gotten to the end and I am DISSAPOINTED on the lack of THRILLING CONTENT THAT HIS ENJOYABLE AFTER THIS CURRENT CHAPTER.
was my box ghost impression good?

That’s one hell of a writers block if it been nine years since it’s last update, what’s more amazing is that this story is number 11 for the most followed Danny Phantom fics. That’s a lot of people waiting for an update for this. It’s a great comedic story, the way the characters interact feels like something they would actually do which is rare since most fics would just tweak their personalities quite a bit to fit their stories. I know your working on other stories right now but please do take the time to come back to this at some point.

oml, this just gets better and better XD

I know you probably get this all the time, but PLEASE CONTINUE! I would say it was just getting interesting, but it's been great the whole way through. I doubt begging will have any effect given how long it's been since this was updated, but maybe flattery...? This is one of the greatest DP fics I have ever read and I think you have captured all of the characters' personalities perfectly. It's funny and complex, but not confusing and all round a really great read. If you're still there, please finish this incredible piece!

This is hilarious

From the looks of it this review isn't going to change anything with future updates but if you ever look back on this fic know that it is still being enjoyed in 2019! I love the twists and mischievous character development that you gave the characters. It would be really cool to see how this plays out and if their is an accidental reveal by the end. I can also imagine the ceremony itself being hilarious!

Poor kid. Vlad going around saying the teen was his kid. On the brightside, nobody has to figure he's part human

Laughter makes the heart light. Thankyou

SO GOOD! This is freaking amazing. I was laughing through reading most of this...

You’re a fantastic author! Honestly, not many can actually pull of a humorous fan fiction. But you have done perfect so far! I’d love to see this continues...but as it’s been years...

Anyway. If you find ideas and keep writing that’ll be great! If not, thank you for what you’ve written so far.

Loved this!