I loved the flow of the story and the way it was writen. The story was tragically bittersweet.
Great job!

I think you are probably the best writer in this fandom on fanfiction. While other stories have more reviews,favorites etc., you have the best style.

:( poor cutey couple

your writing is just amazing. Ayase thoughts are very realistic, I just wish Kanou would explain his feelings, would beg for forgiveness and free ayase. He should hope that one day Ayase would stay with him.

Wow. I've read a few of your works (you have an amazing style- clean and well written, with good word choice. Kudos). But I have to admit, Ayase's personality was drastically different in this rendition- to the point of distraction. And yet, I still liked it. Keep up the good work.

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I have read this story many times, but I always find it fascinating and very poignant. It is an excellent piece of work, especially for a short. Awesome.

This is probably my favorite Okane ga Nai fanfic out of all the others. The characters are no ooc and each part are so deep and truthful.

I'm looking forward to your next piece.

This was a great story. I really love how you developed Ayase's thoughts and feelings towards Kanou. I would have loved for the fic to continue until you reached the critical point of Ayase recognizing what he felt, but even without that comfort the story was a very nice read.

Thanks for sharing

Lovely Spell

Great job, loved it D Favs were Abnormal, Akin, and Enemy. Keep it up _

I guess Ayase hasn't ever heard of Stockholm Syndrome, then? Oh, Ayase, don't worry about that. As if Kanou would ever let you go out into the world alone again. For god's sake, this is the man who doesn't like you to even talk to people other than him. He's a completely insecure control freak-which you seem scarily good at writing. I just finished reading the latest chapter of Kitsune Bi (which was fantastic as always-sorry for not leaving a review ;;). Doumeki is hellishly creepy and frightening, but I'm more morbidly interested in their entwined lives and troubles then ever. Please update KB again soon! I'm dying to know what Doumeki will do next, or how Watanuki will get his revenge.

this was lovely please continue writing I bow down to your muse

Wow, I love the point of view and characterizations for this!

This was a great story! Thanks for putting it up om

...thats was great...n raunchy..n wrong...and perfect! 3