Please come back. I want to see the ending of this. I'm so caught up! Please! I'm begging you.

Knew its prob impossible but i wish i could see the ending. Love this so much. Its another GA in its own rights.

2020 and I am still missing this fic. I think I didn't realise how immersive fic could get until I started reading yours. You opened me to AUs of a whole different kind so many years ago. Thank you.

Hi! I hope you are doing well now. I would just like you to know that story this story is very nicely written and the plot is developing very well. I understand if you are busy in your real life and there are things you are going through but I hope you will have the motivation to finish this story. I would really like to know it's ending. All the best!

Hi there!

I was just thinking about this amazing story even though it has been years. Out of the hundreds of incomplete fics in my favorite list, yours is my top 3 that I absolutely would love for it to continue. Not sure if that tells you anything but this ficlet def was one of the ones I remember fondly and well.

Nice story. So heartbreaking that this is not yet complete. Your story is definitely one of the things that i will be checking here in fan fic. Looking forward to the fight of Natsume.

Please please finish the story... such a good one... please i want to know what happened!

I dont read many fanfictions. I write myself too. This fanfiction however, caught my attention. This is the second time i am visiting your page for this beautiful piece. It would be nice if you could complete it.
I know there are ups n downs in life. But never leave a beautiful story unwritten . Because, just like our lives, the stories we write need a happy ending or atleast an end.
Thankyou for this beautiful work.
:)

Dude it's 4:30 in the morning and I just finished this amazing incomplete NatsumexMikan story...Ugh why is this not completed! I love your writing, especially the way your sentences are constructed to create such vivid images in my head.

OMG this story is amazing! Please don't stop writing. I'm a new fan and I'm totally addicted to your story! Please come back :)))

4 years later, you just got a new reader. I doubt that the story is still being written, but for what it's worth, I think it's pretty fantastic. Great work

Suite?

Hi, the last time I read your story was when I was in my early college years.

I really love your story and how you made us all tied to your story, I'm finally working now yet I sleep at past 2am everyday just so I could read your story from scratch.

We would love it so much if you could update.
2012? I trust you Don't keep us hangging.

Pls.

hi...i really love ur story n really want to see it finish. i know u have many thing in life beside fanfiction but please...complete this story...u have got this far i believe only a few chapter left so please...complete it...because this story is really good. the plot, how u write the story...i believe there many people who really love this story too n really want to its complete. so please help all ur fans...thanks you.

Good day, dear fellow Author-san.
I really hope that you still have time reading reviews rather than writing.

I don't remember when I started to read this story and the last chapter I'd read was chapter 27, I guess. I've started re-reading it and the last three chapters were completely new to me... I've started reading this story because of the NatsumexMikan relationship primarily. Moreover, I've thought that I'd be somehow sad and disappointed now that the battle has begun and the two will be separated (hopefully temporarily). However, I don't remember being so seriously excited while reading about a battle at two fronts. The images and scenes you describe occur in my mind as if I'm watching One Piece or something like that; and I'm not exaggerating! The moment when Tono contacts Mikan on their way and says "I can't reach Tsubasa.", I stopped eating my apple while reading it and felt an alike sting in my gut like Mikan probably felt. Maybe, it happened because Tsubasa is as important as Natsume to me... I don't know. Or maybe, because I had a strange feeling that someone might die in the end (hopefully not our protagonists) and it turned out to be Ji-chan.

Your story is an amazing adaption of the original manga to this plot: the characters, pairings, abilities/alices. I bow my head with respect and am very grateful that you've shared this one with us.

PS: I recommend every new reader of this story to read it after it's finished. I mean, come on, who am I kidding? The suspense is killing even me and I'm normally a really patient person... more or less! Never before has a story - a fan fiction kept me so hyped up. No matter how long it takes, I'm eager to know how this will end!

All in all, you and your story are awesome!

Love,
~Illusion