Terribly sad story. very nicely done. :)

Oh, I thought I'd mention that the title is spelled in correctly. An "i" is missing in "vivisection."

That was excellent.

You are an awesome writer.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Aws! Poor babies...I love them! And this story made me love them so much more! Thank you for writing this! The only part I was confused on was the,Sam had turned on his side, curled so that his legs banked Dean’s back, his torso pressed against Dean’s bent leg, his hands tangled up to take fistfuls of Dean’s jeans.

I mean I cant imagine that.I think thats why its soo gosh darn confusing! I seriously read that like 10 times and still was like "Heh?" But Im just being fussy! Great job! This story makes me wanna go read more of your stories! So keep it up!

This made me ache so much. And in that way it succeeds completely. I can see everything you wrote so clearly and feel it even more. Thanks so much for digging into this moment so fully. I loved the image of Sam and Dean stuck together on the floor.

...telling him to fold Dean in, pull him close until he’s absorbed into Sam...

Very nice.