Dont forgive them you always do go on with your life

After what they did why do they wana find her

How dare thoses bitches

Why dose noone have faith in serena

Meenies

Yes girl, slayy

I really enjoyed the story. It took me a few chapters to really get into the story. But I enjoyed it.

cool story

love all of the evanescence best band eva

Found you through a favorite story of a favorite author's favorite author etc, and read Evolution (very good!); but this [older] story is AMAZEBALLS and after just a few chapters, I added you as a fav author; you can really wind a tale!

If I were you, I'd come back to this story and edit the spelling errors (and edit out the author notes where you say you've interest) —just to perfect it, because it's a damned good piece of fic. It feels very unique (plotline, pacing); and organic, and has some some mind-blowing plot twists! (I kept THINKING I knew what was going on, had no clue, LOL!)

Then I'd put this up for a Fic of the Year contest somewhere just so more ppl could find and enjoy it!

Helluva good job! Hope you post more stuff! :)

-TF

Did you accidentally channel a line from the Transformers movie while describing Artemis? Now I can't help but imagine him as a Nokia phone!

can u make a sequel?

I really liked this story, but some parts confused me. I didn't fully understand why she had to go back in time every thirteen years, how Raye found out, or why the scouts were acting so... above her for. Like why they thought she wasn't doing her job right, and only Artemis believed in her.

I really love this story! You're a really good writer, it's described enough so I can really picture it and I get sucked into the world, but you don't over-describe (which if you ask me is really hard to do. At least, I think so. I do it all the time). Thanks to you, I have stayed up way later than I actually wanted to, 'cause I absolutely HAD to read another chapter... and then another.. and another. But I'm not really mad, I love this story. I can't wait to see how it ends!

I'm loving this story! And this chapter wasn't bad at all. Also, I think your poetry's completely fine. Poetry is hard to write (I've attempted to write some myself) and I think you did a really good job.