I liked it but I don’t love it

Decent chapter though I kind of wish Naruto had the first lemon of the series and Phoenix taking Laura's virginity felt out of place to me (you would think Laura would want her first time with Naruto not Phoenix) so far the story gets a 9/10 from me but this chapter gets a 7 because the Phoenix/Laura lemon just didn't feel right to me...

And no I'm not homophobic the lemon just didn't click with me

Only a few spelling mistakes here and there. Not much.

Good stuff.

well then fuck you too asshole if you cant take negetive input dont fucking write

i love the Phoenix's dirty mind and attitude

That was soo awesome! The story is great and i cant wait forntou to continue it

Great job

Lul, never mind how shit this fic is but you pull Naruto from his first Valley of the End fight, and then advance his age to 16 and say 'get over it'. That's funny. Can tell you were new at this, because it fucking sucks big time. Doing things just because is a big no no. If you can't give a solid reason for doing something then don't do it at all. This entire garbage of a first chapter has had no solid reasoning what so ever.

please continue this

this story is really good and i hoped to read more chapter.

This fix is ruined... Seems no one is able to do Deadpool correctly.

ey continualo la cara de los x men al saber que jane sera tia jajajaja y si de casualidad traeras ninjas a esa dinebsion que tenten y hinata se unan al harem la primera por que ya mucho espero y merece un premio y la otra al ser una experta de armas si naruto le da sin restriccion las armas de alta tecnologia se la engancha ademas que fenix podria pervertir a las dos jajjaja

que continue me pregunto si exodus traera a los ninjas a esa dimension seria genial nutantes y ninjas por doquier

espero que continues la historia seria bueno que ambos mundo (Dxd y Konoha) se confrontaran y lograr que hinata y ten ten sean de la nobleza de naruto.

Please comeback and update this