Reviews for Uzumaki X
GreenArr0w chapter 17 . 1/31
I liked it but I don’t love it
DanDrake chapter 17 . 12/24/2019
Decent chapter though I kind of wish Naruto had the first lemon of the series and Phoenix taking Laura's virginity felt out of place to me (you would think Laura would want her first time with Naruto not Phoenix) so far the story gets a 9/10 from me but this chapter gets a 7 because the Phoenix/Laura lemon just didn't feel right to me...

And no I'm not homophobic the lemon just didn't click with me
AJGuardian chapter 8 . 12/17/2019
Only a few spelling mistakes here and there. Not much.

Good stuff.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/15/2019
well then fuck you too asshole if you cant take negetive input dont fucking write
Roswimypal chapter 3 . 8/30/2019
i love the Phoenix's dirty mind and attitude
qalleesyawesome chapter 17 . 8/21/2019
That was soo awesome! The story is great and i cant wait forntou to continue it
Monster King chapter 17 . 8/12/2019
Great job
xSean chapter 1 . 7/31/2019
Lul, never mind how shit this fic is but you pull Naruto from his first Valley of the End fight, and then advance his age to 16 and say 'get over it'. That's funny. Can tell you were new at this, because it fucking sucks big time. Doing things just because is a big no no. If you can't give a solid reason for doing something then don't do it at all. This entire garbage of a first chapter has had no solid reasoning what so ever.
alphaprince0 chapter 1 . 7/1/2019
please continue this
Borello chapter 17 . 5/9/2019
this story is really good and i hoped to read more chapter.
koseta.a chapter 16 . 3/17/2019
This fix is ruined... Seems no one is able to do Deadpool correctly.
benjamin chapter 17 . 1/19/2018
ey continualo la cara de los x men al saber que jane sera tia jajajaja y si de casualidad traeras ninjas a esa dinebsion que tenten y hinata se unan al harem la primera por que ya mucho espero y merece un premio y la otra al ser una experta de armas si naruto le da sin restriccion las armas de alta tecnologia se la engancha ademas que fenix podria pervertir a las dos jajjaja
benjamin chapter 16 . 1/19/2018
que continue me pregunto si exodus traera a los ninjas a esa dimension seria genial nutantes y ninjas por doquier
benjamin chapter 17 . 1/6/2018
espero que continues la historia seria bueno que ambos mundo (Dxd y Konoha) se confrontaran y lograr que hinata y ten ten sean de la nobleza de naruto.
Eternity456 chapter 17 . 11/12/2017
Please comeback and update this
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