Love this

It was really good actually but if you happen to have time then please, fix it. The capital letters. Meh, that's about it. And perhaps a sequel? Really though, it was a good oneshot.

I loved the end! rotfl

1 if this is K I don't think there should be the F-word in it. I'm a bit ok with that, but I recommend rating it T or changeing that word into something more clean. And are there more chapters ?

actually this story is grammatically correct if you didn't tell me i would have thought a natural born speaker wrote this
Love the plot so Keep on the writes

I'm not an English too, sometimes my grammar are... horrible. But I like the idea. Hahaha, toilet duty for L-Unit XD

I know, Wolf must be care about Cub as in Point Blanc.

Anyway, I favorited this :D K'writing!

Woah...8-0...I-I'm so shocked that Wolf was so caring for Cub. The words hesaid just touched my heart; of course, EAGLE of all people had to break through the sweet (and slashy for all those slash girls out there) silence by saying something idiotic. But it was a really seet Alex R./Cub and Wolf fancfic!:) Hope you make some more! I'd love to see all the delightful ideas you have to throw at me!;D

HaHaHaHa! Soooooo funny! :D xD XD

great story! :) :)

It was really really good. I liked Wolf's confession. :)

What is your first language, by the way?

:L

Awww that was just great :). Loved it, even if it was so short. Ending...XDDDD. Toilet duty. XD. That was cute and something I didn't think someone would write. It's always Wolf is the big bad wolf. Roar. And he can turn nice and all, but no one ever writes him nice since the beginning! Well he's not exactly nice, but you know, without the bad intentions and all. It was really good, liked it alot :).

~Ice

Bwahaha, toilet duty ... That cracked me up. Thank you for writing this, it was great!

Wow, already read this story like a year ago, but re-read it again today:)

Nice story!:) Are you making more of this one-shots! Had me laughing all the time!:)

Keep up the good work!

Anyway, kan net zo goed iets in het Nederlands typen!

Goed verhaal:D Hoop echt dat je nog een paar Alex Rider one-shots maakt!

Groetjes!

Nienke

I know you posted this in 2009, but I just wanted to say that it's really funny! I like how Wolf and Cub made peace... .

Oh lol, this should have got way more reviews then it did!

Unique, witty and sort of sweet at teh same time- awsome! Really really good