Wow! This is a wonderful story. Optimus Prime & Mikaela do look very nice together. Elita is a beautiful name too. I do like how Optimus Prime helped Mikaela deliver baby Elita during the birthinh process, including how Optimus Prime support the Breastfeeding while holding onto Mikaela's breast. Wow, Optimus Prime is amazing. I also liked how he singed Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star as a special lullaby to baby Elita. That is so cute.

Keep up the good work, I hope you will update soon.

Thanks,

ChelleNorlund.

PS: Optimus Prime & Bumblebee are my two favorite Autobots from Transformers.

Elita does hip hop and gymnastics for the last talent show act at Apex Elementary School.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! And I ESPECIALLY love your reference to Phantom in this chapter! As a ridiculously obsessed fan of it, I knew exactly what you were conveying and it was PERFECT. :)

I don't know if you've actually experience childbirth from an outside perspective, but mothers are usually exhausted after giving birth. My mom was so exhausted that she had to be carried to the bathroom to get cleaned up. The fact that Mikaela's walking around almost immediately after birth is a bit unrealistic. But the rest of labor was pretty spot on. Child birth is different for every woman I guess...

I truly love this serird

I love this story (series) and it’s like the forth time I read it, but something just occurred to me. If Megatron and Optimus came to life before earth even existed, how could Optimus have given him the nickname Bright Eyes when English wasn’t even a language yet?

So I just wanted to let you know that I read this fic when it first came out in 2009 and it stuck with me. And today I was watching the first movie again, cringing at it and laughing and shaking my head, when I was struck with this fic. I could not, for the life of me, remember the name of it, or the author name, or even what site it was published on. So I went through every fanfic site I could think of that I had frequented back then and I found you scattered through the Mikaela/Optimus Prime filter, so I clicked on your name.

I cannot tell you how much this fic means to me. It was one of the reasons I wanted to write, and specifically why I wanted to write things with romance in them. It is so well written that it holds up, even years later, even when I have taken classes and written books of my own an PUBLISHED works of my own. I still love this fic and I have bookmarked it again.

Everything from the characterization, the pacing, the structure of the entire fic. The logic of it, while fantastic in most settings makes perfect sense in just the way you've described it and set it up, makes me smile and nod along. I love the way you describe the characters, their emotional conflict, I can SEE things unfolding in my minds eye with the same fluidity of an actual film.

I know it's been nearly a decade, and you've probably deleted this account and moved on, you're probably not that big into this pairing or fandom anymore, but I just wanted you to know that this fic is amazing and you are an amazing writer.

This is not the first time I am reading this story and it won't be the last because I love it! I found the April Fools contractions hilarious because my mom said I did that to her when she was pregnant. She went into false labor and didn't give birth until the 28th. She calls it my best April Fools joke ever.

This is the first time I truly Mourns that impossible to show facial expressions on coments. The Aimog'im are pale shadow.
I wish you could see me while I read this phenomenal love making scene while I listening to the song .
It feel sacred to me.
it was hard to sleep after because I was emotionally overloaded.
If it was possible my comment would be hug you tight while mumble "thank you" over and over again.

So pleasant the intimate moments of Optimus and Mikaela. They are do emotional. My eyes flickered with pleasure while reading.

It was SO beautiful! T.T I'm so sad that it's over but I loved it!

Great story

I am so loving this story

Yeah labor sucks hard-core. She's taking it awful well

That was unexpected