So in character! This story made my night :)

/Twerp/ now that is a new one...even for me~ *Laughs gently*

Ha, *Sighs deeply* It is true, Vexen shows 'love' through insults, but Marluxia likes things literal, besides nothing turns him on more than the words 'I love you' or at least in my opinion. *Rubs back of head slightly* Any way, wonderfully paced as usual, Pie-san~ 3 ~MAr

Let me get this straight, this is after they faded, right? Cause the whole "We. Both. Died." thing kinda gave me that feeling.

Really hot and really in character. A-friggin-mazing.

Aw... It's always fun when Marluxia tortures Vexen. It's his way of showing he cares. :3

.It. :D

This isn't a pairing I would usually read but I've been fishing around trying to find good fanfics of them since I stumbled across them and I have to say I really liked this one! Now I don't know the characters that well but from how other writers have personified them you seem to have got them down to a t!

I loved the way they interacted with each other - kind of how you'd expect a longstanding couple to react: like Vexen's rant and how Marly knows just what to do to rile him up because it's all expected and part of the routine. Another part of that interaction was in the dialogue - yours was REALLY good! Very natural, it didn't feel stunted or forced, it was like a normal (well, I say normal) conversation.

Ok before I ramble on and start gushing (even more)about how good I thought this was I'll just say it was a definite fave! Thanks!

All part of your big plan, eh, Marluxia?

Still curious as to what that big plan ended up being. D You should write a sequel~ *is always pushing you for sequels, lol*

Hot~ And yet very in-character. c:

Getting Vexen to admit his feelings isn't easy. Like pulling teeth...but it was a wonderful scene. XD

awesomeness D

Vexen and Marluxia not having enough sex? How could Marlu ever let their relationship degrade that badly?

:D Yay! This was nice, I liked it.

So...um...what did Marluxia spend the money on? (Do I wanna know...?)

~LWD~