Reviews for Prince Of the Night: A New Beginning
EvernightDimNess chapter 2 . 2/21/2010
Although this was made a long time ago!

This was really good from the beginning to the end! I LOVE Jason! He is a smart talker. And I love everyone's sarcasm. It's just funny. There were TONS of spelling mistakes but, it's all good. I also do enjoy Candy! I can't believe she is a vampire now! Where is the sequel? When is it coming out? I MUST KNOW!
RandomReviewer chapter 8 . 11/15/2009
This is so awesome!

I can't wait for the next one!

Please start writing.
Dreamyangel2009 chapter 8 . 11/14/2009
This was a good story, with an original plot and end. I admit at first i started to read it only because of the suggestions of Sara Blake but now i can't wait for the sequel to appear. Just one advise if I can make- work on your resume and make it , I don't know , more attractive! Good luck!
Sara Blake chapter 8 . 11/14/2009
This was an amazingly good end and I can't wait for the Thanksgiving so that the second Prince Of the Night story to come out _! I'm sorry that I didn't reviwed for a while but I was busy for school and I hadn't log on for a while BUT now I'm back and I updated a new chapter for "Black Roses" for wich i hope you'll kindly give your opinion T.T! Till next time _!
Charlee Rayne chapter 8 . 11/12/2009
no! I really liked jason!
Maargareto-sama chapter 8 . 11/11/2009
well that's an interesting plot twist, i can't wait to find out if everyone is actually what they were like in luna's, uh, dream thingy i guess. GREAT JOB!
LegendOfZeldaFan3738 chapter 8 . 11/11/2009
Wow! That was an awesome ending!

I couldn't believe it. This is a fantastic story, please start working on the next story. This is great. Can't wait till next week.

This sord of brings me to tears that it ended...for some strange random reason.

I'll be the 1st to review next story of POTN.
LegendOfZeldaFan3738 chapter 7 . 11/10/2009
NO! Why! I really really hate you right now Selena. I can't believe you would do that! I caan't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! This is really really getting intresting. And i love when Daniel says random things three times and when Luna and Candy annoy him. Espically when she said hire a maid, then he said he got broke, then she does that obvious thing my sisters do. Anyway!

UPDATE! PLEASE!
Maargareto-sama chapter 7 . 11/10/2009
:'( NO YOU MADE ME CRY! pretty pretty pretty please don't make jason disappear he has to end up with luna! i am a bit confused, is candy dead? if so then kaleb can go join her! :OI sorry he's not my fave character, it's a toss up between daniel and jason. (wouldnt you know i go for the evil ones)
LegendOfZeldaFan3738 chapter 6 . 11/10/2009
Thank god i come on at 1 AM in the morn. XD

i like this chapter. Thanks for explaining.

Kaleb, as you said is like seventeen and so is Candy and then Jason must be that age unless his birthday is in another month. Could you tell us the months of their births? That would make everything make sense. Or you could tell us.
Maargareto-sama chapter 6 . 11/10/2009
great chapter, poor candy! i like her attitude though, it gives the whole scary-ish parts a bit of humor. kaleb has a brother? geez this is getting good! can't wait to read more!
LegendOfZeldaFan3738 chapter 5 . 11/10/2009
Amazing! i can't believe Jason's 23! That is kinda creepy.

But didn't you say that Jason and Kaleb were the same age when they met? Wouldn't that make him the same age as Kaleb...? Explain in your next chapter Selena. Because you just made my brain go BOM!
Sara Blake chapter 5 . 11/10/2009
I have only one word for this story so far...AWESOME! I love it. I admit it got me a little confused in the beginning but now it's all clear. I can't wait for the next chapie to come out ! Please feed my hungry for literature brain..._
Maargareto-sama chapter 5 . 11/9/2009
omfg jason is a TWENTY THREE YEAR OLD? that's a bit creeper... but great chapter hope to read more soon!
LegendOfZeldaFan3738 chapter 4 . 11/9/2009
Omg! This is so awesome. I'm hooked. Please update. I'll be the first to review for the fifth chapter!
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