This idea is retarded. Why would this make Bella stay mortal?

This is just Edward fucking himself for Jacob for whatever I can't even fathom cause at this point in canon, he is willing to change her.

please wright a chapter two

I LOVE IT. FANTASTIC!

wow. i really wish you would continue, the idea of this story is just too great to not go on with, you know?

please continue. i would love it.

Putting it on favorites because you've put more effort than Breaking Dawn into resolving the love triangle, but I can't say I'm fully satisfied. I'm greedy so I wanted more than the usual fade to black.

I really liked this - interesting idea.

lol...this fic is disturbing and more then a little disgusting...IMO...i mean sharing? are you some fucking polyamorist? or some nasty ass swinger? no man would share...NO man that truly loves there woman would really share...no matter what nasty ass fantasies run through your hormonel female brain...NO MAN SHARES...get it?

I hate twilight so much.

But when i read this, i absolutely loved it.

People love description and stuff, but holy smokes...thats a lot of description.

I'm one of those people who are like cut to the chase, so i had to read the description.

Good job!

Most first fan fics. by people stink and i mean...stink!

You prove that not ALL first fan fictions suck, you even made a twilight hater like it just by a tiny bit.

Thank you, erm...i guess.

Can't wait for the next chapter and your next story.

Your one of the 4 people who get my rating but,

7 thumbs up out of 6.

Keep writing.

Don't forget this.

And i'll be waiting for that other chapter or story...