I really dont like how rapey sanji and brook were this chapter. Their excuse for doing so wasnt good justification at all

HILARIOUS!

Please write chapter 5

whaa...-_-

I looooooooove how you wrote Luffy! It's super in character, as if it were written by Oda himself.

I've never Laughed at a Fanfic This Much before HAHAHAHAH! This was So Funny And I love how the characters are Pretty much the same as The ones from the Anime

i might pretend guest's ideas arhow this ends since it seems story is dead. might add in orgy on ship and sex all over the world happening.

are you not continuing this story because it's been a while.

Super perverted, but also super hilarious.

its really good but the fuschia village part was way too underwritten. i mean makino was practically luffy's mother, surely she would react with embarrassment at seeing the boy she raised all grown up, well endowed, and having SEX in front of the whole world. seeing luffy completely naked and pleasuring nami might fill her head with naughty thoughts that she would need to leave to go somewhere more private...

Bwahahahaha! I love this so much. But the most important question is, what is Ace's reaction? After all, he clearly has a little brother complex!

I keep imagining Dragon and Hack seeing Luffy and Nami's projections, they decide to look for Sabo, and find him with Koala trying to mimic what the two Straw Hats are doing in the sky. I imagine Sabo continues thrusting into Koala and he's like, "Hey. Nice to see Luffy still teaching me a thing or two even now."

I have an idea! When the marines arrive, Tashigi is comically mesmerized and aroused by Zoro's nude form, and Smoker reprimands her. A huge fight breaks out, the marines vs the naked Straw Hats. At one point, Smoker stumbles into the orb, and his naked form projects into the sky (establishing that the orb will just project any old bloke in their birthday suit even if fully clothed). Tashigi then gets pushed into the orb, and a new projection forms of Smoker eating her out for the whole world to see. Embarrassment and hilarity ensue.

What the hell are you smoking?! This is hilarious and isn't badly written at all. Luffy's scene where he apologizes to Nami is a little odd, but it isn't terrible. Aside from that, the rest of this is great. It is pure chaos and it somehow works. Zoro trying to not give a shit, but he keeps getting surprised is awesome. Franky and Chopper being manly men. Brook and Sanji having lost to their perversions. Usopp suffering. Luffy not caring. Nami caring A LOT. And Robin just not even sure what to do at this point. Everyone is just perfect in this.

I feel bad for the girls, they're completely at disadvantage situation. As much i love the comedy, i don't like sanji and brook at all. I want to slam them even more when they molest robin