| Reviews for Soul Poison |
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   Volcanic chapter 1 . 3/31/2005 This summs up Tainted soul so beautifully I love it it was so deep you've acheived a deepness with Piccolo that I can only hope to connect to |
| The Bebop Nameck chapter 1 . 10/18/2002 Woooow! It's great, I'm envious of your talent. I assuming though that all great writing came with time and effort. I guess I lack the effort. I'm off to read more. Oh just one little side note, I spelled my one screen name wrong, it's BarrelRacer0118. See ya at Art Forum! -Renee |
| Darkshaper chapter 1 . 9/22/2002 Please, do write another chapter! I can't make any comments on this one other than "WOW", caps included. Let us know how this is going to end! |
| Catgirl13 chapter 1 . 9/14/2002 0.0 Piccolo... *sees Pic trying to get away* Oh, no you don't mister!*grabs Piccolo and ties him to a chair* OK, we're going to get through this. You're going to talk, and I'll listen. No way in Hell I'm letting the darkness take you from me! So let it out, cry if you have to, just let it out! This is a wonderful poem. It actually, how much I hate to admit it, describes Piccolo pretty well. Sure he's tough and gruff on the outside, but he's got feelings too, damnit! I love this, all your work is great. Keep writing, Ja-ne! |
| dark kitsune chapter 1 . 6/12/2002 Oh man... Damn Velasa, that was one hell of a poem. *once again is at a loss for words* You're amazing. |
| Raziela chapter 1 . 5/25/2002 *sobs* Poor poor Piccolo... *gives Piccolo a big hug* Awwww, lil' Namek... you shouldn't hide everything deep inside of you... Great poem, I love it! This is definetely going on my favourites list. *clicks and adds it to her fave list* Awesome, even though it makes me cry. *sobs some more* Keep up with the great work! _ |
| Leia chapter 1 . 3/9/2002 How depressing. How awful. How completely without hope ... how totally and utterly Piccolo. You've done it again ... again. This poem is just - I don't know - it seems to scream "Piccolo" quite loudly. I love it! I can't even find words to describe it (which seems to be happening more and more lately; I don't know why I'm losing my eloquence. H'n. Oh well!) This poem makes me want to shake Piccolo and tell him that Gohan loves him and can help him - the little one is so innocent; he can help remove the poison from Piccolo's soul, if only he will let him ... AUGH! The angst! Good - no great - job, Velasa! ~Leia |
| Kittioto chapter 1 . 3/6/2002 ... Groovy! Hmm... I thought that it was rather deep, and quite inspirational. I think I can imagine what DBZ time this was set in... poor Piccolo... |
| Piccolo0714 chapter 1 . 1/30/2002 I LOVE IT! Wonderful and so accurate...your mind amazes me! |
| Pitir chapter 1 . 1/17/2002 That was some good shit...psycho |
