Reviews for Whirlwing
Guest chapter 14 . 9/23/2013
will this ever be updated since you said you had the rest of it planned out?
Michiyo chapter 14 . 6/29/2013
Just wondering... Will you still be updating this story?
SwirlzSmile chapter 14 . 9/6/2011
Heya~

Just wondering... are you still updating this story? Because I started reading it yesterday, and I'm really amazed with the quality of writing... I hope you update it

I'll put it on story alert anyway :D
yw59lover59 chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Hahaha This is really good. First one I've read to be this kind of plot. The only flaw is the scenes back in Japan with Tsuna and the rest of the guardians. They're a little too dramatic. I actually laughed while reading that part. Hope that didn't offend you. But otherwise, you're doing good in going all out with Gokudera :)
M.Hibird chapter 14 . 4/20/2011
Again...love this fanfic...

But I really hate it when people just stop writing. It's really frustrating how you get all excited about a fanfic and then you realize that the author hasn't updated in years and probably gave up on it...

What happened to Whirlwing II?
M.Hibird chapter 14 . 4/20/2011
I love this fanfic!

The imaginary conversation with the cat is sooooooooooo cute!
KhAeL chapter 14 . 4/17/2011
To be quite honest, I thought Hayato was already an adult when I first read this story hehe it was much easier to think of him in these circumstances if he's older. Other than that, you speak great Italian and you have a very unique approach to the story. Which I like. I'm not a HayatoXHaru fan but yeah as long as they're not together that's fine by me ehehe
viettvnt chapter 14 . 1/10/2011
...WOW! I am SO glad I came across this story O_O LOL It's REALLY good! I love Luana and all her quirky-ness of a character you made her to be I really connected with her and her dealings of situations (I would probably do the same thing she would've done XD, esp the beginning with the whole 'to undress him or not to save his life' XD) Oh mannn I really can't wait how this will unfold! (the convo between Hayato and Victor was SO cute and hilarious! XD but woah, he dated HARU?...okayyyy... XD) Please update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
tsuki demon chapter 14 . 5/7/2010
you should update this x3 its really good O i really wonder whats gonna happen with tsuna and them...if they will go there and find gokudera...and if they do will he go back? and what would luana think bout him being in the mafia and remembering everything... XD goodness so many things to think about~ cannot wait for the answers in your story 3 *wow long review*
Luka14 chapter 14 . 4/16/2010
I am still looking foward to the next chapter. This is 1 of my favorite KHR stories.

update soon D
redgirl438112 chapter 14 . 4/14/2010
Carlile... where have you gone... ;;

We miss this story :c
blackghost7 chapter 14 . 2/18/2010
Victor the all knowing...I heart the cat now. TO THE EXTREME!
A-Prayer-4-da-Damned chapter 14 . 2/17/2010
ahahaha

i like this chapter XD

this have a good balance of romance and humor(if its intended..)

i really like how hayato talks to victorXD

oh well...

keep up the good work

and update as soon as you can

im looking forward 2 it
jhjkhjkhfjklghdfjkl chapter 13 . 2/9/2010
ah, god, i love this story... w

update soon~ :)
redgirl438112 chapter 13 . 2/7/2010
:D This chapter really made me smile...

dear god, i love this story. you are marvelous. please update soon owo
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