SWEET!

This is a true master piece and really hope it will be continued. The characters are spot on, the writing style is phenomenal and the story a great idea. I especially love the insides into wraith society. Please never give up on this and finish it one day, it's a jewel among SGA stories.

Update?

Hmm, I had lost track of this story! Glad I found it again! Glad John and Woolsey have an understanding because I foresee some out of the ordinary scenarios arising that will have Woolsey shaking in his boots and realizing he needs to be as flexible as John already is! Kolya free?! Tod witha Queen?! Thinking John is going to be busy!

Woooohoooooo the Second has won...and Wooooooooooooooooohooooooooooo I love Todd for being so direct, so powerful and able to kill without mercy, especially to humiliate that bi*** of a queen!

Now I really hope the next chapter will be posted soon. I am really a fan of your fictions!

*plaintive noise* More? Please...

Interesting conversation between Miriel and Sheppard...

Will she tell the queen or keep it for herself for further dealings?

And how Todd could help the Second to win this confrontation?

I hope to read soon the next chapter!

Great chapter, keep them coming, look forward to the next.

A great chapter, Trill, which I enjoyed a great deal. I really hope to see some more of this very exciting story in the near future.

Glad you have updated, please continue.

Hi! I saw that this was a update to a story from long ago, so I read Race for the Devil, which was great! Now I will continue reading your sequel! Ah...looks like Kolya got his Get Out of Jail Free card! Too bad...really...too bad! Knew that Todd should have turned the man to dust ! Looking forward to John's reaction to Kolya being loose!

Ohhhh great! I've just read the chapter 19 that I really appreciated.

Now I am gonna read again the earlier chapters you re-worked.

Hope to read chapter 20 soon!

I just found this story of yours and devoured it in the last 3 days - it is truly amazing. I think you have a really good grip on wraith society and write very belivable - characters and story line.
Is there any chacne you will finish this great story? I very much would love to know how things are progressing from where they are.

So not long enough, Trill.

I am interested to find out just what T plans for that Queen, and how he intends to control her. All I'm wondering is if it's something he has Kenny in mind for? Hmm... the plot thickens.

Yes! Update to this wonderfully intriguing story. So now Dahlia has the upper hand - good. Todd still trying to control everything, and now his second is going to have a punch up with the captain - should be an interesting outcome - looking forward to this one. Sheppard is nothing but persistent and being very observant. Poor Strassen, I do feel sorry for the guy, he is caught in the middle.

Hope you will update real soon, would like to see how all this ends. This is a great story and am enjoying reading it.

Thanks for writing.