I have read this one once before and still find it one of the most dark, twisted, and Kinky Kagome fics I have come across. You did an amazing job with it.

This story made dark, deadly, painful and depraved so sexy and satisfying! There aren't too many people gifted enough to make me root for evil like Naraku is here, to win. Excellent work! But excuse my confision or dumbness coming up. I get hee death and he obviously revived her but how did he wish it so? Where did she wake up? In her era?

Wow that was interesting. Like some others, I'm a little confused with the ending but apart from that this was quite an excellent story! The plot was twisted and believable, and made me cry when Inuyasha and co. died T_T But it was amazing language seriously I loved some of the words and metaphors you used! You're seriously talented!

This was a good short story!

Your Cosplaying as Naraku sucks!

Wow that took me a while to read. It was a good story. I wasn't too fond of her friends dieing in that way but over all was a good read.

I read all of this in one night. My eyes are glazed over. I'm tired, yet I want to read more. WRITE MORE!

holy sht that was long. lol. but you did a brilliant job. keep up the amazing work.

Awesome. Very dark & Very good.

oh my fucking god that was amazing! is there a sequel? if not can you make one please?

This story is so ridiculously twisted... but so am I, because I can't help but reading it over and over.

Very well done - very dark - imagery. The plot, while not unheard of, is so much more developed. It's completely believable as well, which only adds to it's dark appeal.

One thing, though... I don't mean to sound like a complete and total idiot... but what exactly happens at the end? Is it just a dream? Did she actually die and he brought he back via the jewel? I'm having a hard time figuring it out.

Sorry if I sound like an utter moron. I don't know if I just missed something or what, but I'm confused.

Anywho, great story! Going to read some of your other stuff now...

Really good story, very dark and well written. Can't say as though I like the idea of her secretly wanting him, it's a bit too OOC for me. I do love the amount of detail that was put into this story, I'm sorry to say though I lost alot of interest in it with the collar and the piercing of sensative places. As someone who's had many areas pierced I know how painful it is and can honestly say I never found any sexual pleasure in the experience, so I'll try finishing the story at another time.

Though dark and morbid at most times, this was really good. I can't figure out the ending though... Could you explain that to me? Was it his wish on the jewel? Anyway, this is the first Naraku/Kagome fic I've read and now I'm curious about this pairing. This fic was so long and took me forever to read, but it was well worth the time!

dude, this was like the longest chapter i've ever read. but it was good, so ok, i guess

I don't think I've ever been so determined to read a fanfic in my life as I was to finish this one! It's a bore to read most InuYasha Fanfic, it's so far fetched this however was not. You took into mind perfectly the sadistic characteristics of Naraku. Really made my day to read this. Amazing Fanfic and most pleasing ending!