Aww, that was so sweet! You wrote it amazingly, and I love how you did all his thoughts and all that. Nice work! :)

I was on the verge of tears dude! *sniffle* Axel!

aw

can u believe my eyes are watery? oh my g.. i mean oh my pants! im so used to the happy stuff when it comes to akuroku. so sad! sniff. sniff.

question, 1) is the blog based on this?

2) y did u decide to write such a sad chapter?

im sad. n dont worry, physics makes me mad too ( or it used to do) i think i get it now but still. screw it! lol

c ya

YOU are so mean u made me blubber like an idiot,now my shirt is soeked and my god that was so sad!.

romance i wanted to read nice romance not tragety! (still awsom story i just glad no one elce can see me atm i hate crying )

Arggh, must... not let... the tears run down my cheeks ;n;

uwah! So touching.

I love reading your stuff, great job once again c:

Not a tearjerker, but nice all the same. Definitely favoring.

And dammit, this is, like, the fifth time I lost the game today. Dx

I'm sobbing TT the japanese ending of Axel was tons better then the english...but I absolutely adore this!

My parent;s just asked me why I was crying, I replied. "Axel died!You should be crying too!" XD

Omg. I didn't have access online yesterday and OMG! I love you. I love Axel. I love everything (except Physics) lol. I love how you portrayed Axel's thoughts. POOR AXEL! WHY DID HE HAVE TO-?

Ahh, well. This is awesomely written. ;_; awesomely tear jerking. :'D

Keep up the great work!

GOD GOD GOD GOD!

you know what i think

i love it and hate it at the same time

i read it again AND YOU MADE MY ACTUALLY CRY THIS TIME

it wasnt a lot of tears, but still

amazing story but-

GAH!

hate you hate you hate you

cant stop sniffing

GAH THE GAME! ;-; poor xel... He loved his little blonde so much. :(

AW.

I lostthe game.

XD

And this was so sad and yet I loved it. Wonderfully written. (:

I basically saw the same thing when I played the game. Hehehe.

My friend and I were discussing the other day that Sora cries when he leaves Hayner Pence and Olette but doesn't when Axel dies. It makes us angry. Roxas should have popped out of Sora or something. Rawr. D:

Oh well. Great job! (:

xox Rose

Aw! It was sad. :( I've always hated Sora, everyone cares about him and not Roxas. *stabs Riku* What was I saying?

THAT...WAS...SO...BEAUTIFUL~! BELIEVE IT~!

duude ;-;. i forgot. do you like making me look soft? this is amazing. -props- 3 you used some of the dramatic phrases that i absolutely LOVE. i really like this one. instead of a series of events, its a feeling and thought. and i LOVE it. you did this one very nicely ;]

YOU MADE ME CRY!

Evil! why did you have to say the lines over and over again.

and why does the song have to play in my head?

I dont get it! i dont like tragic story because they are sad yet i Love it.

i just don't get it!

Axel dying makes me go insane.

I have to say, i really liked it though!

Thumbs Up!

and

more Hugs for you.. tomorrow

then i can spazz about something.

I printed it.. with a purple ink because purple symbolizes Sorrow. which totally fits the story!

i am so glad she didnt read it! and i was glad you didnt dedicated it to her! actually i could have giftfic it to myself since i was the one who posted it for you!

wow. i was slow! oh well i shall hack your file one day..

i promise.

and i'll probably forget about it!

I know it made you cry!

Though i'm proud you actually finished it!

because i never finished my sad story!

Anywho... i dont know what to say.

i'm always off topic but as i said before it makes you happy.

i should write a story in this review but then i have a chapter to finish so i should move on to that first.

hm... i'm hungry. i should blog later but then i need to study and stalk you here.

i have no life man! all i do is stalk people especially you.. although i see you like everyday and talk to you every day!

I'm happy i never get tired of talking to you!

Anyway, i love your story! and i was crying like hell!

blame harley for this, especially with the video and the song playing and you keep saying,

"i wanted to see Roxas"

"He made me feel like i had a heart!"

eff you man!

I love you.

wow. bipolar!

okay am done!

Write more or i'll eat you and launched myself at someone.. (small person!) you know who am talking about.

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