Aww, that was really sweet. I especially loved how you ended it, making it look like a funnel.

And I can't see how well-written fluff about two characters we love counts as "horrible", but whatever. :P

Would love to see more of your not-horrible-at-all fluffiness. :)

so cute and loved it

no, seriously, it was very cute and i really loved it! the only thing that was a little bit ... not so good?... was, when stella fell down and started bleeding. for me, this line didn't fit in the story... dunno why.

Loved it! I'm pretty sure that joella was meant to be and am uber glad that others feel that way!

This was so adorable (and the perfect story to read after Tuesday Morning.) I love how Stella just randomly decides to go see Joe because she won't be able to sleep otherwise and I loved the whole tripping exchange and then the whole last bit.

Well, I loved the whole story, really.

This was adorable! I love how STella said Joe "Tripped" then he asked if hshe wanted him to trip again.

that was cute. the line which said that joe was a kaleidoscope of emotions was really poetic in a way. i love joe's eyes too.

Really nice. I so think you should continue it.

aww! that was adorable! i love joella fluff! they are soo adorable! omj i loved that episode! and im glad i didnt read this story until after i saw the episode. lol. this was a really well written story! really good job! it would have been cute if joe had seen her cut knee and had like put a bandaid on it for her or something. idk i just pictured that happening when u wrote that she fell and hurt her knee. but it doesnt matter. i loved the ending! it was soo cute! anyway, good job! loved it! D 3

Awe :) Loved it !

or that was cute and i did love it but i really wish i could find a stela and joe story that was longer then just one chappter isf u no of any can you pleas let me know that would b great oh n keep up the good work loved this one-shot lol

can you explain chocolate chip cookies with blue sprinkles to me(why you said it) cuz i've never seen chocolate chip cookies with any sprinkles. (sounds good though. Story was good, love kalediscope metaphor. 8/10

aww, that was 100% adorablee! and it's good that you like hearing my thoughts, cause i'm good at tellin' em! hahaha. i saw the episode on demand yesterday and almost cried from happiness! ahh! and you did a PERFECT job writing the little missing moment of the night! i felt like i would mess up the chemistry if i attepmted, and i'm so glad that you got it spot on! :)

thank you!

Katie!

It was adorable. Beautiful, wonderful, completely adorable :] I loved it!

I completely can relate with the almost-absolutely-no-inspiration-no-matter-what-you-do problem. I've had the same thing for a while now- but I'm thinking of beginning a chapter story, a short one, maybe, but a totally realistic one...

who knows, right? inspiration comes at really random times.

anyways, back to the story. i've been a jerk, who hasn't been reviewing, even though i still get the emails and still read the stories and all that jazz. :] to put it in short, i love your writing (still) and i'm becoming a sucker for ... i can't decide or but i know i love your 's. :]

wow... way to make a rambling review, eh?

-lena.

That was really cute & really well written :) And um, yeah, Double Date...BEST EPISODE OF JONAS EVER! :P

I loved your missing scene - since Kevin and Nick were clearly not the only ones who missed something. Great job. I found the Macy/VanDyke scene to be very inspiring as well.