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Cindy M 19 chapter 16 . 4/17/2015 Sam is making out with Dan XD Danny is going to get pissed off ' Dan's and Sam's hormones attacked again XD |
Cindy M 19 chapter 12 . 4/17/2015 Sam was a little slow at the end XD |
Cindy M 19 chapter 10 . 4/17/2015 Does the clones of Danny are also interested on Sam? |
Cindy M 19 chapter 4 . 4/17/2015 The key is the hair! Dan have red eyes, that I only notice after reading the chapter XD |
Cindy M 19 chapter 3 . 4/17/2015 The white flames are awesome I think of white flame and when I think of Dan... and that gasoline truck XD |
Zenyi chapter 16 . 6/6/2014 CONTINUE I BEG OF YOU. PLEASE. FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY. THIS STORY IS AMAZING. |
Polska99 chapter 16 . 8/25/2012 Hmmm... It looks like Dark Dan is becoming more like his younger self. I'd love to see Danny's expression when he finds out! Oh, ad please update this! |
Sam chapter 16 . 8/22/2012 Could you please update more chapters thank you ! |
xSerenityIsn'tAlwaystheAnswerx chapter 16 . 8/21/2012 e.e well that's rich. He goes all dan bazooka on her now. Lmao this was short but stilll nice. |
Just another fan for life chapter 16 . 8/20/2012 Wow, your writing style is simply superb. You keep your readers in suspense and confusion and have a few lovely plot twists in the works. A more human Dan is something I always love to see. I like to think no matter how evil whichever Danny becomes he actually would still harbor a soft spot for Sam. Confusion on Sam's part is great. When your characters are in the dark so are your readers making it all the more enjoyable to read! I love that Sam has some powers and would love to see her connect with them even more, maybe even slightly start to like them. Maybe her powers can have a down-side too like a weakness. Just an idea. The way you keep Sam's thoughts a bit niave and realistic is fantastic. I really love her sarcasm and remarks. Perfect combination of slight comedy and drama. Genius. Just another idea, what if Sam used Dan's slight infatuation with her against him. If she made him think she could love him then told him she hated him? Just some food for thought. Hope to see her form some part of her plan soon and really hope it includes her powers, something she had manipulated Vlad into teaching her. You've said you have most of this planned out and I really hope you're able to update soon! Just go with your gut and what you think is right! Love the story and the execution, great read and I'm really looking forward to more. Not too emotional at the moment which I think is good! I hope to see more of your own brand of original genius. I'm sure you won't disappoint. Once again, Superb! Bravo! |
ShadowDragon357 chapter 16 . 8/20/2012 WELL. I Think we know why you liked writing this so much. NAUGHTY NAUGHTY. Lol. JK. Glad to see an update. So I guess Sam pretty much jumped him because she's so desperate for Danny? Or perhaps Stockholm Syndrome is starting to kick in. |
SamXDanny chapter 16 . 8/20/2012 Uh-oh... Sam made out with DAN? o.O Imagine Danny walking in at that moment xDDDD That would be hilarious xDDD Anyway, Update Soon! :D |
xSerenityIsn'tAlwaystheAnswerx chapter 15 . 8/1/2012 ._. MUST IT DISCONNECT. |
trombone429 chapter 15 . 6/13/2012 nice job with the little cliffhanger if thats what its called. i looovvveee this story youre a good writer .when is the next update? please let it be soon |
LindaBabii chapter 15 . 6/4/2012 Awwwww! Update soon! :D |