Oh come on! Another cliffhanger? Hmm, well played, well played.

Wow, serious cliffhanger. I can't wait to read more! Great chapter!

Liked the story, really liked how BB acted through out the story.

your amazing!

Cool!

I loved the story especially at the end when Ravens' mom was looking after her it almost made me cry. Don't want to sound mean but chapter 12 I really didn't like it but other than that I loved the whole story! Keep up the good work. :)

Yayyyyyyy!Just so you know,BB and Rae are my fav couple to

you are soooooo 's great.

Oooh, not a bad story! I suppose the main problem I had was that Raven seems a little too...lovey-dovey and mushy, a little out of character.

Ahhh...nice...I love it when I read a complete story. If this story was incomplete, the suspense would be killing me!

Since you've been reviewing so much, now I'll return the favour too!

Nice first chapter! I admit I'm not a BB x Raven fan, but I like the way you're depicting this. Now, on to the next chapter. :)

I read this entire story and i have to say it was really nice

:D

Your story had a nice theme to it. it was different and nice :D

The characters were a bit OOC at times but the story was good none the less. Ill be looking forward to our next story.

:D

Id love it if you read my BbxRae oneshot and review it too. id be grateful.

LOL but its kay if you dont, i get it.

Btw.

I read own the entire Maximum Ride series [AWESOME! :D] and watched Inception [gets you thinking. xD My cousin and i went home and spun a coin to check LOL we had no totem like theres]

KAYTHANKS

:D

Keep typing

~Magma

before I forget, Chico's Chica Magnifica sent me! This is an awesome story, and I'm loving how concerned BB is for Raven. I noticed only a few spelling and grammar errors, nothing too crazy though. Im a bit confused. For the guest villain, do you want an original character, or just a villain? anyway, great story, cant wait for more!

Interesting start. You are a fantastic writer! I really wanna read chapter 2 tonight but im writing a chapter and im already addicted to urs but i need some sleep tonight. so raven was killed by trigon, like during 'the end' ? i getcha! Ok, so im gonna read ch.2 either tonight or tomorrow (if u dont get a review from me PLEASE remind me. I have a VERY short attention span and a very bad memory)

very nice BBRae story. if you want to, i wrote one too. its called "Reaching For Her Hand". but, like i said, very nice story. :D