Honestly this story would be far better if you’d followed your own path as you did in the beginning instead of it being “canon, with Zero's different decisions”

Youre literally copy-pasting stuff. Like at the end of Tohdoh's conversation when Rakshata responded, you didn’t even mentioned Urabe. I can only assume you forgot he existed between his one comment and that. But the beginning was good, it was original and fun and had good atmosphere, then it became a rehash up to and including moments that make no sense.

I had another odd thought, what if ghost Taizo met Ghost Nappa! lol.

You know, in my head Charles is an extremely heathy and we'll put together 70 year old man.

Odysseus "The Mediocre Prince" is a 50 year old man who is a bit touched in the head due to that fact that his father is also his uncle and his mom is also his Aunt, the same could be said for his grandparents.

Tianze is a nieve 10 year old little girl who is being screwed over by her father's killers.

So yeah, this marriage arrangement was rather sickening to me.

I had an odd thought ... ... ... So what if Miyuki and her baby were also among the one million Zero's, and then later on Zero meets them in say the mess hall, there Zero joins them for like lunch and Miyuki offers her baby to him, so all of the Black Knights and everyone else are treated to the sight of "Daddy Zero" lol, just imagine the rumors that would pop up, lol.

Dad this isn’t being updated I liked it

Yo Kyugan, just a reminder, FFN has a buggy PM system right now, so you'll have to physically check your PM Inbox to see if you get any messages. I suggest at least twice to three times a week, but as close to daily as you can get if you are actively trading messages.

Even After all these years this is still one of the Best story's on this site I truly hope you come back to it one day.

That's not how hymens work ~

as you said we've been patient... for 8 yrs... so pls come back!

I know its for plot... but... can we just stop with killing with the harem members? .. my gawd...

tho i'll still continue reading... and for that u have the duty to finish this fic...

FCK YASS! ... Gawd i loved it! ..

YESSS! OMG! ... I must admit I like this! MillyxZERO! ..

tho I am officially on C.C x Lulu's ship.. but this isnt bad at all!..

I love my Milly moments.~

Nunnally is gone(dead)? Well there is no point in saving anyone.

Why don't you update this story it come this far and is good please continue.

A shame you didn't update this. I was enjoying it.