Reviews for Seeing
MaxiMillion77 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Awww!
lacie darling chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
This is so sweet, their small but endearing moments together. I simply love this couple, and this only added to that 3
SWORDJ chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Cute story! Other than some minor spelling mistakes here and there, but you did the characterization pretty well! Hei x Yin ftw. 3
Gureshingure chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Sweet! XD
zecross chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
wow great even if its short i like it
BLACK0NYX chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
wow this is very very good! i loved it x thank you
ButterflyBroken chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Fainted when I first read it! Loved it...3!~ Reread it again and ~*sigh*~
YuukiChan95 chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
i like this fic. go hei and yin!
CreativeKiss chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
I thought this was precious. Absolutely precious. Your story was sweet and demonstrated Yin's lack of understanding simple things (because in the anime - I find - she is somewhat of an oracle). But her blindness makes little things that we take for granted large mysteries, and I liked seeing that perspective in this story. However (and I think someone pointed this out already...) Yin's real name is Kirsi (which is Finnish). Besides that, you had some small spelling errors, and there were a few sentences where it seemed like you were typing too fast and left out a word that might have made it flow more easily. But it didn't too much detract from the story. Great job!
mai-chan chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
incredibly sweet. i love hei/yin pairings
Jez0209 chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
What a cute fic, it's really nice, thanks!
sakuramiko chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Very nice! Paying homage to my story 'I like it'? No no just kidding! Saying that is something characteristic of Yin. -refering the the hair tying part-
Kilasfd chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Nice story. It was pretty fluffy, especially towards the end, but there's nothing wrong with that. The only really obvious mistake I could find is that you spelled Yin's name as Kirisa (it's Kirsi) at the beginning of the story. Other than that, it was written really well.