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MaxiMillion77 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012 Awww! |
lacie darling chapter 1 . 8/28/2011 This is so sweet, their small but endearing moments together. I simply love this couple, and this only added to that 3 |
SWORDJ chapter 1 . 6/22/2011 Cute story! Other than some minor spelling mistakes here and there, but you did the characterization pretty well! Hei x Yin ftw. 3 |
Gureshingure chapter 1 . 6/13/2011 Sweet! XD |
zecross chapter 1 . 10/19/2010 wow great even if its short i like it |
BLACK0NYX chapter 1 . 10/9/2010 wow this is very very good! i loved it x thank you |
ButterflyBroken chapter 1 . 2/24/2010 Fainted when I first read it! Loved it...3!~ Reread it again and ~*sigh*~ |
YuukiChan95 chapter 1 . 11/7/2009 i like this fic. go hei and yin! |
CreativeKiss chapter 1 . 11/5/2009 I thought this was precious. Absolutely precious. Your story was sweet and demonstrated Yin's lack of understanding simple things (because in the anime - I find - she is somewhat of an oracle). But her blindness makes little things that we take for granted large mysteries, and I liked seeing that perspective in this story. However (and I think someone pointed this out already...) Yin's real name is Kirsi (which is Finnish). Besides that, you had some small spelling errors, and there were a few sentences where it seemed like you were typing too fast and left out a word that might have made it flow more easily. But it didn't too much detract from the story. Great job! |
mai-chan chapter 1 . 11/3/2009 incredibly sweet. i love hei/yin pairings |
Jez0209 chapter 1 . 11/2/2009 What a cute fic, it's really nice, thanks! |
sakuramiko chapter 1 . 11/2/2009 Very nice! Paying homage to my story 'I like it'? No no just kidding! Saying that is something characteristic of Yin. -refering the the hair tying part- |
Kilasfd chapter 1 . 11/2/2009 Nice story. It was pretty fluffy, especially towards the end, but there's nothing wrong with that. The only really obvious mistake I could find is that you spelled Yin's name as Kirisa (it's Kirsi) at the beginning of the story. Other than that, it was written really well. |