| Reviews for Rival vs Assistant |
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Yinyang555 chapter 5 . 11/5/2016 Please continue, this story is addictive and has an amazing and cute plot! |
Pikka chapter 1 . 8/3/2016 Hey this is a great story, don't tell me you've abandoned it. I hope you can write another chapter and finish this umm what's a good definition magnificent (Did I spell that right?) masterpiece cause it'd be a shame if time thing this good didn't get finished So if you could please update this story |
Meitantei-Clark chapter 4 . 3/28/2016 first time I might be on hakubas side |
Meitantei-Clark chapter 5 . 3/28/2016 why did you stop ? |
ChosenChild chapter 4 . 1/14/2016 Head Canon. Eve growing up to be a Magic Detective like Blackstone. (He had a radio show called the Magic Detective as well as being an awesome magician.) Also, that trip would only serve to strengthen Hakuba's resolve. It was EXACTLY what he wanted out of life. I really wonder what KID's plan was? I thought it might have been to reveal his true identity to Shinichi, but now I'm thinking that's wrong. |
ChosenChild chapter 5 . 1/14/2016 *Oliver Twist style* "May I have some more please?" I all seriousness I really love this story. And Eve is the best! What is this truth? Is it about the kidnappings? My fav chapter was probably Hakuba abducting Shinichi to London, he was REALLY good there, and I feel like most people don't give him a fighting chance when he's up against Kaito. I think that you could have had Hattori find the photo on Facebook or something instead of Watson flying it to them if you wanted. I actually loved how Hakuba and Kaito kinda go about their courting differently. And Hattori's support was fantastic. I always wondered who Ran supported, but I'm glad they were afraid of her. Sonoko would support Hakuba. She and Kaito would argue over who was the bigger KID fan. I think that Kaito's attention grabbing (when he's not KID) would also get on her nerves. They are too alike. |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/29/2015 I really like this story. The rivalry between Hakuba and Kaito is funny, the plot is intriguing, and the characters are in character. I can't wait to see what happens next! :D |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 5 . 10/9/2015 I hope you will continue this story someday, it's really interesting! I like it! :D I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :3 |
Avatar.NIX chapter 5 . 7/25/2015 This is a really interesting story! The ongoing plot concerning Eve (who's absolutely adorable, by the way) really pulls me in and I love the way Kaito and Hakuba are fighting for Shinichi's affections. Also, Hattori's plain awesome. And, of course, I adore the way that the four of them are equals. Very nicely done! I hope to read more one day. If not, then know that I've thoroughly enjoyed these five chapters. :) |
annea101 chapter 1 . 7/10/2014 Does this story live? |
Baked Soap chapter 5 . 4/16/2014 I just can't choose over who I think would be successful in wooing Shinichi. I've read and support KaiShin a lot but I can't also can't help but support Hakuba. The first chapter of this story actually made me think that Kaito might be the third wheel in this- maybe it was the way you portrayed him at first. I hope that you update this soon! It's been a long time but I will look forward to the next chapter unless you decide to tell us that you're discontinuing this story yourself. |
ebonypol chapter 5 . 11/19/2013 Please update! :D loving this :) |
Alara Phoenix chapter 5 . 12/20/2012 Daaaaaamn. Looking forward to more! :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2012 hey! it's been more than a year, i hope you update because i really like your story and i wanna know what happens next :D |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/19/2012 (\_/) (‿) (“)_(“) Love your story! continue :D |