I loved it!:D

This deserves a standing applause.

I don't even know where to start, I mean - granted, the pairing's not exactly my cup of tea, but in an AU fic it works almost distractingly well. The setting's perfect, and I love every little detail you have managed to squeeze into this; I could see it all happening in front of me, and I liked what I saw. God, I hope someone made a movie script out of this. :D Also, Jericho was a nice add!

Anyway, thought I'd finally comment on this since I, for some reason, haven't done so before. This has always been one of my favorites.

I love this. The way you described everything was very realistic! Randy being a criminal sounds fun to write not to mention hot! This fic was sexy from the start until the finish. ...if I can say that... Anyway the Ortista pairing never gets old for me and I really enjoyed this! Faved it.

This was a great short story. Different and good.

There is just something unbelieveably hot about the idea of Randy being a criminal. I don't know what it is, but I swear, it's there. And I'm thinking about old time, they said see at the end of every sentence criminals.

WOW! this was so damn HOT!