Well, seeing as it's been five years I suppose it's unlikely you'll be finishing this; then again, I myself have several ideas that've been waiting for years, and I hope to get back to them sometime. At any rate, I thought I'd let you know that I've been slowly going through this over the past week or so, and am very much intrigued. This is a very interesting concept and set of characters, and I'd definitely like to see it all work out. I'm putting this on alert, just in case-and even if it isn't on this, keep up the good work!

-Scott

Update soon! Some people do read your stories, and they are excellent!

This has been a very interesting story. Are you planning on finishing it? I think it would be worth it, I'm very interested to see how this all works out.

I just recently stumbled across your story as I was desperately searching for a distraction during down time at work. I have to say, I am REALLY looking forward to seeing the rest of this! I almost never offer comments or reviews, cause I am not so good with words, but I am really enjoying the story, can't wait for more! Please keep up the awesome work!

'cmon you gotta do more with this!

I'm gonna give ya a noogie if you don't update in forever again! I lost the link until you sent it to me.

Ya did good with it, but I wanna see more about this past thing with methos. :D

But that's just me

Sorry about the split review, but I accidentally submitted early. Dialogue is moving the story along, opening a few questions. It would be good to see the character bios and even possibly a small blurb refrencing which organization knows about which, and howmuch of either is public domain...

May the Muses guide your hand as you write and your heart as you live.

I am whom you think. About the intro, you know how I tend to react to emotional scars...

-And Moon turned it's back on Earth,

Jealous of what Sun recieved

Earth stood in shock, quite numb

At the plight two lights concieved.

Intersting turn the stories been taking. I hope your Muses speak well to you. Working for an Alphabet Agency can be interesting to say the least... Write well, write on, Sweet Lady

You go girl! :D

Oh, lovely. Simply devine. I love Bast's messanger, and "Adam Pierson, his personal mooch", classic. I had wondered what happened to you, my dear. i was worried. I know exactly how you feel about creating. I feel the exact same way. must be the lousy atmosphere. I must say i was very worried. it's not like you to stay away for so long, but as i said before, i can sympathize. I haven't been creating lately either. i just started a new job in a comic shop and therefore have no free time. i am going to try and post soon for everybody, though. i have up to chapter 19 done, i just need to type them.

Honey, if you ever need help with any story ideas, or just want someone to listen to you, u know my e-mail. Feel free to drop me a line. I would be more than happy to listen and give you feedback.

i am one tired pooka. My ideas are running dry from lack of sleep and my schedule is getting crazier. it was such a great relief to just sit down and read your story. Please post more, so we can talk more when i'm more awake.

Your ever-loving, ever-faithful Pooka

Wow MK, as usual this was worth the wait! I'm looking forward to the next 7 chapters, and don't worry, as one of your faithful reviewers I'll stay at my post :-) Good job!

I finally got around to checking out your story. I said I'd get to it one day, but it always takes a nice long goofing off from writing my own stuff to catch up with my to be read list.

The idea is interesting and the characterizations are good.

There are some technical difficulties though. You keep drifting back and forth between past and present tense, which is somewhat off putting. But, the major problem is lack of point of view. One second it's third person, next it's first, then it's first but with a different character, and there's even some second person sprinkled in. I think you have a really creative story in there, but it's hard to follow in places.

Well done, as usual ... you just stop too quickly each time ... I like looonnnnggg stories :-) I know, I'll wait till you've done 17, 18, 19, and 20 .. then read them all at once for a longer treat :-)

FBI - Fantastical Bureau of Investigation.

Red's a little.. different. Not the color mind you. But hey, at least the good guys are getting cleaned up. Next is Red's mouth.

Whee. Much better. I can follow it much easier. Er.. not that I particularly want but hey. ;) I still look forward to the Evil A being squashed. heh.