$20 says that Sarah's pregnant.

Thoroughly enjoyed your fan fic, thanks for sharing! :)

I absolutely loved this story and the one before it that you wrote. If they ever made another movie, I would love to see them use your stories!

I love this story as well as your first :) you're an amazing writer and I love your work :)

I absolutely love how you have greek mythology woven into this story! It is a big part of my life.
My first and middle name is: Echo Narcissi. Like the greek myth "Echo and Narcissus." Which got me all sorts of teasing at school.
Not to mention being named Echo while being deaf is also very ironic.

Love the story and hope this new judge will soon learn that being of Sarah's bad side is NOT a good thing but so far awesome story

You just spoiled the whole archive for me. You are amazing. Both of these stories are simply brilliant. Thank you so much for writing such incredible stories. Moments you made me smile, others I laughed, some I felt like my heart was going to explode out of my chest and most of the time you simply had me on the edge of my seat. I've been on for a few good years, and never before have I read such and entrapping story that I simply couldnt walk away from. I raved about this story as I journeyed through every chapter. My friends are currently reading it as we speak. You are a brilliant writer, with great ideas and are amazing and putting them on paper. Thank you, for giving me some hope for this whole site. Thank you for making me read my first fanfiction in over a year. Thank you. Thank you Thank you. I honestly am heartbroken that this series is over. I have a high hope that you choose to write something equally as amazing that will make my heart soar as these stories did.

You are amazing. And Ill always remember this as a story better than any novel.

Finally, thank you for giving me the story I always wanted for Sarah and Jareth. Everyone else simply plants slapstick comedy and their own ideals. Somehow, you managed to create the world I have dreamed of. You have created all the perfect scenarios. You have sincerely made my day.

shewhoshallwrite

Holy crap I hope they travel safely! As if having to fight to get your husband back isn't difficult enough, doing the same task while pregnant is downright terrifying! Good luck, Sara!

Fantastic story! While I found it a little slow to start out, once it got going it revealed itself to be a true gem among fan fictions - which only proves that not everything is as it seems and you can't take anything for granted. ;D But I digress, the plot was very well thought out and engaging. So bravo! And the best of luck to your future writing endeavors!

Wow...that was epic. You have such a talent for writing...please, please continue the gift God Himself has given you:)

It is important to write about goodness, honor, integrity, valor, genuine love, trust, faith, hope and strength in this world of people who behave like the banished Olympians...selfish and cowardly.

Your theme of "things not being what they seem or what you perceive them to be" is quite apt...for we live in a world but are not from it...our true home is heaven. Thank you for scribing this to us...reminding us of the virtue and meaning that awaits us if we but enter the labyrinth of the King of Kings:)

"I'm going to miss you, Sarah," Hoggle whispered so that only she could hear. "You're my best friend."

*weeps*

THAT broke me. THAT reached into my heart and reminded me of the simple truths of friendship...thank you *smiles*

This was wonderful. It took a few days, but it was worth every moment.

(I get the feeling that I started to read this story when it was still in progress, but I must have given up at some point.)

I am happy to have rediscovered such a wonderful story, and I thank you for writing it, sharing it, and finishing it.

Sincerely,

Miriam

This has gotten very dark very quickly. I'm worried for Jareth and Sarah.

I'm looking forward to whatever it is you have planned next.

Sincerely,

Miriam

So, I've read both your stories and figured I would write just one review. I am simply amazed by stories! The way you weaved story lines and myths together is something I've never seen. I swore that when I was reading your stories, I was actually reading a Greek myth. They were beautifully written and i do hope to some from you. Again..thank you for writing 2 amazingly well done stories and Great Job!

Okay, so I've just spent the past few weeks reading your first story and now this one and can only say this: HOLY CRAPPERS MAN! You are an amazingly talented writer and I hope and pray you continue expanding on your creativity with more fanfiction. (Or who knows you could maybe write your very own novel!)

Wouldn't it be wonderful for a third sequel? Maybe a peak into Galen's reign, or Jareth becomes high Arbiter?

Oh, thank you so much for this wonderful story. You are truly gifted :)

-Traceylynn123