yesssss. i love any fic with shukaku involved. cute ending

Loved it!

that so hot, waouh

*NOOOSSEEEEBLEEEEDDD*

wow nice

This was a great story, but one thing drove me out of the groove of reading it. Sometime in there you say that Shukaku hit Lee's "G-spot"-something that guys don't have. If you changed it to prostate it would be more accurate.

Also, be wary of using euphamisms like "member" to discribe the penis. It reeks of cheesy and badly written romance novel. Using cock or dick is better and more erotic, and even the utilarian penis can work.

Love it it was so Awsome keep up the good work

...I now drool while waiting for Mukuro from Saving Grace to grow up. Hooooooooolllllllyyyyyyy~ That was...YES!

Holy cow that was awesome! I really didn't think Shukaku would be so gentle and Gaara might have to smack him a few times, but you wrote it wonderfully. I love the part where Gaara tells him "...okay, I'm listening." So funny!

That was so fucking hot

Awww...Shukaku is acting so sweetat the end). We all know he loves Lee too. How could he not?

que buena historia

pobrecito de Lee, soportar las pervercionas de Gaara y encima las de Shukaku

This story was extremly hot.

much better, the no rape was defenatly a step up, and i love the threesome.

but is the raccoon really gay or did he just need to stick it in somethin?

and i kind of want to see the raccoon get gang banged by gaara and lee . . .

damn that was HOT! *cleans nosebleed*