this is adorable, and i wish they could've stayed this happy.

Very touching.

I love the little touches you add to these little prequels

That was a wonderful read.

That was beautiful! And I think it was nicely IC as well :)

'"Your mother will move the world to see you live."' I assume that was intended forshadowing for the events in the show; good line.

Nice. A touch crazy, but then, that's who they are. I love the images you conjure - the way you play around with the relationship between fire, energy, and the characters' lives.. Another great fic.

onz man, really great one shot

This was sweet.

I love this. It was well written... and it kind of foreshadows how far Ursa will go to protect her son.

"Do you hear that, my son?" Ozai said. "Your mother will move the world to see you live." - That line gives heavy pause for thought.

Very nice piece. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

Sweet one-shot. Great job.

y good! Never thought the "Phenix King" (snort laugh) would have a sentimental side. haha. update soon?

I love how you made Ozai really attuned to lightning; it reminded me of "The Day of Black Sun," when he could feel the eclipse ending.

I imagine miscarriages being quite common in "Avatar" so it was a nice touch adding those in.

Aw. That was positively adorable. I love Urzai so, so much. I also like the idea of Ozai and Ursa having a couple of miscarriages before Zuko finally came along.