wow...danm...that was seriously amazing and so true and i personally want to say thank you! not for having the ballz to post this but for letting it be known to those who read it!

~MuchLuv~...

A good story. I'm just glad Shuichi stood up for himself. Only sad thing is he's majorly heart broken.

...Let me worship you.
YOU are a god, for having written this piece. Great ending, although it leaves me with this unfathomable incomplete feeling T_T I can never know which I like better for Yuki and Shu's relationship - angsty or happy
I think you should try to leave lines in between paragraphs.
And let me worship you some more...
Are you going to write a sequel?

fantastic work! as depressing it may have been, it was still beautifully written. great job

T_T Yuki shouldn't leave Shuichi alone when he's so depressed...

Very well written. Keep up the great work!

~fd97

Megumi: Oh my god ... that was so sad and I don't know why! Well ... it's just that usually only death-fics and such are sad to me, but this was really, really sad ... good work!

this was good.

I seem to have this masochistic addiction to fics where Shu leaves Yuki even though they make me depressed and sullen the rest of the day...This was very good, though the rating was a bit high. _;; Poor Shu...*hugs*

meep! Very nice. And I like the song at the end. I have that CD, so I was sorta 'listening' to it in my head. _

- AB

That was so sad... Y-Y Luckily THE thing that made Eiri-sama accept Shuu-chan is, to my opinion, the very fact that Shuu-chan is always himself, no matter what... Well... There was the episode with the sailor fuku, but still... It was sad but really beautiful. I enjoyed reading it.

*Shumea*

Very nice. Your prose is refreshing and unique. *applauds* Very good!

I hate you. Why? Because of things like this that make me second guess my work. Did I write as affecting as this story was? Was what I wrote as dark? As sad? Am I living up to my own standards? Then I read something like this and I realize I've boosted my standards up even higher. Cheyne, you have written in quite a few anime gendres. Here's to hoping you keep writing.

I have to admit, I really liked this. It was dark, yet very expressive and true to character IMO. *claps*

That was excellent_V you are very talented...I think i'm gonna read your other stuff now...

omg! that was soooo depressing ::sniff:: and thanks for the message u wrote at the end, that was quite touching