Interesting. I like it. But I'd rather it be Alvin and Theodore and they were mates to each other.

Sense you said “ I was hardly willing to think any further.“
1. You’re not gay.
2. You may be too young to write that kind of story.
Starting a gay story without the imagination or the nerve to follow through. If your friend isn’t going to do it then why did you? And yes Simon is known to be gay. But that’s because the writers are ether making fun of him because he’s nerdy or thinks he should be gay. Personally I like reading gay chipmunks stories.

Please give us more

Bruh you just gonna leave me high and dry like dat why you gotta do dat maan. 0/10 needs more dick

Cute! I love it

nice story, it has an interesting plot so far with plenty of room to expand,

I hope that maybe one day you will make a sequal to this or another story similar

Keep up the good work

cheers

You should write a sequel to this! I actually like Alvin/Simon as a couple. IDK why, I even kinda like Brittany/Jeanette after reading a couple stories on them. I say, you write the best stories, no matter what the couple is.

PLEASE write a sequel to this amazing story!

I hate . .

this is good XD

WAH! oh, why the suspensful ending? why? it was getting good! great job, btw!

delicious

That was a great chapter. Though I wish you could have continued. AxS are one of my favorite couples. You should make a part two or something. I hate cliffhangers, always leaving me hanging...good start! -

you really should write more to this,i'm curious to see what you would think of.. not just...you know...

Lmfao

I was NOT expecting that.

When I read the writers block story the first time, I thought that was a story in itself.

So when I started reading this and realized that, I didn't think it'd end with that happening lol.

I think this is the first time I've seen a A/S from you, but it was interesting.

tht was awesome!

theres not enough Almon fics around!

i loved thi gonna continue?

please do xx