Cute. Love it.

With the cancellation of some long-running soap opera series on TV,many shows seem to be incorporating soap opera elements in various episodes. I've noticed this in dramas like "House",

"Grey's Anatomy"(both of which beg comparisons to "General Hospital" on occasion), crime shows like "Without A Trace", "NCIS",and "NYPD Blue",and even on sci-fi/horror shows like "Star Trek:The Next Generation","Buffy the Vampire Slayer","True Blood",and "Smallville".

NOT A BAD THING AT ALL.

Used in moderation,the soap opera element can actually enchance the quality of the show,and has done so in many episodes.

I liked it but i think it should have had more twistes b4 they declared there love for 1nanother

i really love this fanfic

ah, 'tis an ancient art.. not burning toast.. when my brother changes the dial and it burns.. gr.. (lois style glare at my brother)

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i swear it looks like i'm stalking (for lack of a better word) you and all your stories...

if this came to you in the shower... maybe you should have more? :P

bah.. lana annoys me.. her whiney, non-loisness, yucky, uhh... i forgot where i was going.. but... umm.. yeah. good work.. :)

WHAT!

how is jimmy alive. i mean i'm happy he is, but how? looking foward to the next chapter

God your getting a lot of ground covered aren't you. Betrayal, jealousy, love and revival already and you've only written three chapters. Way to go! :-P

ok not quite sure were your going with this, but love the ride your taking us on. keep up the great work, and hope to see longer more updated chapters in the future

That was a whirlwind of a story all packed into a short chapter. WOW. I don't know what to think of Chloe there was so many things in that chapter that make me question her sanity. :D

I wish the cousins had a bit more of an argument over Clark but oh well.

I still liked the chapter.

God, you're pure evil, with that teaser! I really was thinking the worst - as I'm others were as well!

But I love you anyhow!

Keep up the good work. Love your other fanfics.

So I take it this is a S4 or S5 story (based on Chloe still having feelings for Clark).

I hope the fallout between Lois/Chloe will colorful or uncomfortable. Most stories just have Chloe just accepting it fairly quickly. We will see if your story will go down the same road, or if your going to tread into some funny cousin fighting.

I was a bit surprised that you had Chloe show up instead of Lana, as that would be a totally different cliffhanger. :D

The whole plot about burning toast was funny, and nice.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Yup I wanna know what happens with that! please update soon :)

more! more! more! i like this story please write some more.

PUT IT UP PLEASE :)