I hope you can come back to this story. I know a decade is a long time and people change, as does their writing style. But. But, this is a really good idea, and I think worth rethinking. :)

Very interesting politics...
compelling & original.

Very few mention the “other three”
parts of Great Britain (or Magical Albion):
Wales, Ireland, and Scotland.

It’s ironic when you point out that
Hogwarts is in Scotland!

Very interesting AU characters.
Go Katie Bell! I hated that Draco
harmed her in canon.

How will the “Flying Foxes” of Gryffindor
be affected by Twin George’s cad-like
behavior during the OFF year of the
tournament?

Ginny Weasley is a malicious, self-centered
Bitch. Many Weasley’s display selfish traits
(except Arthur) which is interesting to note.

Why would James & Lily choose to protect their
baby by going under the Fidelious in a cottage
in the Welsh village of Godric’s Hollow? The young
family had access to THE POTTERY?!

stupid this didn't continue, but otherwise damn! finally something where hemione wants to date him where MoRon doesn't shout his dumb ass mouth for and ginny accepts it.
Could make it so in a tree way relationship but i gues not.

There are only two problems with this story, one is minor and the other is major. The minor one is quite simply that Harry said he ran into Katie at the station and that if he ran into her before giving the twins the money he probably wouldn’t have given it to them. But now, they supposedly got together at school and he learnt about it then. Granted, he could have just been hiding that fact from the twins, but then it begs the question of why he said he wouldn’t have given them the money when he did anyway. The major problem is also simple. You abandoned the story. This is possibly one of the most well written stories I’ve seen on this site and you’ve portrayed every character well. The best part is that not every character talks the exact bloody same.

Wow! Such a cool story! I love all the politics and just how you’re relating it to the geography of the country too :D I really hope you’ll eventually get back to this but as someone who has never been able to complete a story I know how much fun reading ideas is too! Thanks for sharing and hope you’re having a great summer :D

Arg! Angsty teenage girls!

Love this! Good characters, and angry!Harry. My fav type of story. Thanks for sharing!

Good beginning! Thanks for sharing!

Huzzah a Katie Harry story. Too damn few.

This is such a riveting story! I hope you are able to come back to it some day!

Damn! This was good! I didn't get the reference to Doghead 13 but I've read what he posted in The Book of Dobby and the others. I really wish he'd've finished the one where Harry's a Dragon. That had me laughing almost as much as The Book of Dobby. Now more about this story. I hope you can either bring your muse back from the dead or get found by another. I was really getting it to this.

Thanks for another great read so far! I do hope that at some point your health and/or interests permit you to get back to writing.

Eh, it was going well, until we learn that Harry is dating a lesbo. Meh.

This is a great story! I love the characterizations. Smart Harry with a lovely girlfriend, who has self-esteem issues. Responsible adults with (gasp) actual common sense. Moves in play to protect Harry, free Sirius, improve the Great Britain wizarding world and take down Dumbledore. Since it's been six years since this was updated, it appears you aren't writing any longer, which is a shame. This is a fascinating plotline with great story-telling!

Hey I realize its been a hell of along time since you updated and this story and hell its probably abandoned...what I want to know is WHY!? First of all, its well written and the plot is outstanding...hell this is the best scene in court room 10 (where fudge tries Harry) that I have ever read...although you should of had Harry mention tom marvolo riddle name and then to prove that is voldie real name have him show the wizengeezers the pensieve memory of whole chamber of secrets that would of caused one hell of an uproar...also I was seeing what looked like latter on isobel would of been invited into the potters bed for a permanent threesome!