I can't even access the website

Really? Missing scenes? Ok, Ieave it here

I really, really love the story, but I am unable to continue reading without the missing sections of the chapters. I have spent two days searching for the missing portions that you state are located in The Writer's Coffee Shop library. I have been unable to find the website, so I can't find the missing pieces. I feel like I'm missing so much of the necessary content that I'm going to have to abandon the story, and it is so, so good.

That was an amazing story. I am so glad everything worked out for them in the end and had 3 beautiful babies.

Thank you for writing this amazing story for us to read!

:) loved this story

I JUST TOLD YOU I CANT FINF IT THERE FOUND A LOT OF OTHER STORIES BUT NOT THIS ONE SOMETHING ABOUT YOUR LASPED TIME ITS NOT THERE ANYMORE ON MY COMPUTER ANYWAY NOW I FEEL CHEATED

I COULD NOT FIND THIS STORY THERE MUST HAVE ALREADY BEEN TAKEN DOWN DAMN I WANTED TO READ THAT

I'M GLAD THEY ARE GIVING DATING AND BEING A COUPLE A TRY THATS GREAT.

I DONT KNOW HOW TO SIGN UP FOR TEASERS I'M AN OLD LADY NOT TO SMART WHEN IT COMES TO COMPUTERS MY SON GOT ME A LAPTOP MY GRAND SON SHOWED ME HOW TO GET THE FANFICTIONS SO THATS WHAT I DO ALL DAY I'M AN INVALID ON OXYGEN 24/7 SO THATS MY DAY I LOVE READING

THEY BOTH SOUND EXICITED ABOUT THIS I WISH HER AND EDWARD LUCK

THERE WAS NOTHING WRONG WITH THAT CHAPTER I LOVED IT

I dont like that up to this point I have to go to a whole different website to read the rest of the chapter. I've gotten lost because of it. I'm going go try and finish this story but if there are too many more 'go to my other page' chapters then I'm just going to stop reading.

I have to say, This story was AMAZING! The emotional roller coaster it sent me on was amazing! I am not usually into reading all human stories because I feel it takes the fun out of the vampire thing, But when I do come across one I like, I have no problems letting everyone know...

I did read this story over on the other web site, so I could read the full chapters, but I figured I would review here.

One of the things I really enjoyed was the fact that it was not predictable, every time I guessed what was going to happen never did, and it left me laughing. There were parts that had me laughing so hard I almost pissed my pants, and then there were times that this story really hit close to home. My son was born with a very large VSD and he had to have surgery when he was 5 months old, we almost lost him, because it was not discovered until then, So reading about Aaron really cut me to the core, then later with Edward. Those points were really hard for me to get through...

The Bella in this story really reminds me of myself, it was almost like looking at myself through someone else's eyes... So thank you for such an amazing story!

But through all the good of reading this story, I found the pacing to be a little wishy washy. To me it seemed like when the story was focusing on all the bad emotions, it seemed like there were 10 chapters about it, but then only 2 of those chapters focused on the fun exciting stuff.. It was like a really slow burn though the rough, which I do understand, But there should have been equal measure with the good too, it just seemed so fast paced.. But that could also be my imagination too...

I just want to say again, that I really enjoyed reading this story, and thank you for writing it!

Eek! I think this story will keep me up all night reading!

Just wanna let you know I've been reading this story since I found it, I've only taken breaks to eat and sleep lol. It's a great story! Sometimes I wanted to stop just to comment on things but then I couldn't stop reading so I didn't. I love this story! :) great job!