Yeah well, of course Zack would like to be woken like that more often xD

Omg... That was hot. o.O 'drools'

Loved it! ,

one word: hotness!

So well described! Very sexy _

This was freaking hot and enve thought it doesnt have a plot IS EXCELLENT ur talented with lemons and I totally adore this pairing

...Wow... that was shocking, yet I didn't freak when I read it...

Good job... very strong, but that's ok.. I can just imagine all the catching up those two have to do...

5/5

beautiful! Simply beautiful!

Gah T-T

Forget Zack. Cloud doesn't know what he does to ME.

lol No, really it was very good. Thumbs up!

That was hot. Okay I need to go eat some ice cream now, cool down before I spontaneously combust or something...But really, it was good. _

That was...whoa. *fans self* Really, really hot. Oh my. And at the same time, it was sweet as well. The perfect balance, just like this pairing,

It's really good. Very cute and really hot. -

There is nothing like when the shy ones come out of their shell.

What a way to be woken in the morning!

Yeah.