That was a great reading. It really got me caught up, the mystery was on point and I really liked the Schiaro Scuro parts. I felt like knowing more about Ed's stay at Xing.
Thanks for the amazing story :D

I thought ed was dead and roy chased ed's ghost. but never knew ed still alive and breathing. And I didn't expected that there were a happy ending at the end. Good job. I liked it a lot

Not sure if you intended for this much intrigue and mystery, but it's glorious. Love a good mystery and as usual your writing is lovely, also the different people and PoVs is such a good way of unveiling what's happened.

Oh yeah, I'm down for this. Love your writing and I'm so excited to continue this!

wow. this ia a really great piece of work. i was captivated by it. from the painting to a happy ending (banzai). thank you for giving me a good story. you are great!

This is such amazing story!I LOVE it!At first, I thought the ending would be a sad one, I'm very glad it was the contrary! I loved that you included elements from the manga like Xing and General Armstrong :D
For a second I really thought that Ed would die,fortunately he didn't. But now I think they would be in constant movement because that mad emperor is still after them,right? At least, Roy and Ed are together now, that's important!
Again!I loved this fic a looooot!Thanks for giving us such wonderful story and I hope I wrote everything that I wanted to say right because english is not my mother language :D

Two thumbs WAY up :)

The feels
They killed me

Fantastic story

Got me crying in the 6º chapter for Roy's reactions.
So painfully beautiful. *sigh*

Loving the history.

I know this was finished a few years ago, but I just wanted you to know this is great. I really enjoyed how to jumped point of view, which is something I normally despise. You did it in a way that was interesting and unexpected without being too terribly jarring. All the elements of the story were told in a unpredictable order with the flashbacks paired in with the switching of characters. It was wonderfully creative. Thank you so much for posting.

:')

[in the speechless world]

I love the ending!

great story really well done

i love it! omg i'm a fan! :)

kudos!

loved this!