I screamed. Not gunna lie. I did not see this coming and I am very emotional

This was really beautiful. I was never really big on Jazz x Prowl, but I think this has given me a new appreciation for it.

Of course they're betting, and of course the twins would notice

That's terribly sweet

I should have Starsxream permanently deactivated

That's adorable!

Awww

Cute so cute

You just contradicted yourself within a few short paragraphs of each point. Earlier you had Jazz tell Sunstreaker that Prime didn't know they were bonded because he didn't approve. Now you're saying that Prime remembers what it's like to be bonded, as if he knew they were bonded and approves. So, which is it? Please be a bit more consistent here.

I was singing I will wait by m.a.s the entire time

Reasonable? Anything that brings him back is 'reasonable'! It was 'unreasonable' that he had to die! (Still cries) Yeah, I'm willing to suspend all my disbeliefs if it brings any of them back, really.

What Prowl might have gone through after Jazz's death in the movies is always heart wrenching... I never fail to cry in these parts..:...(

'Gravity works!'
Me: XD I'm gonna die!
Jazz: *looks over my shoulder* ...BWAHAHAAHA
Prowl: ._. Ookaaay?
Bots: *trying to contain laughter*

I say jazz has ADD and prowl has OCD

Oh My Gosh. I was just looking through a bunch of the archives when BOOM I was reading it. I have been reading this story for hours. I did take breaks that's why it took me forever to read. I just happen to like Jazz/Prowl and just started to read it.

I like the where it goes all the way back into time where each mech was a sparkling or Youngling. Only I have read few stories on the movie and this one had amazed me. At first I couldn't exactly picture it but in the end I loved it. So the words sentences I thought were amazing. I really like Gravity. That was funny. I cannot make a story like no matter how hard I will try.

Till next story y'all!