such a great fic! so much more developed than most one shots, i was sad that it was over so quickly i felt like you could have made this into a mini series or something! anyways, i really loved this one and was glad to have found it!

wow! having dracula as ur maker now dats a kicker! amazing story! i know this one is a one-shot fic but kinda hoping though if u will show sookies turning

Very good story! I wish it would have gone on through Sookie's transformation. Great job!

Great story keep up the good work looking forward to reading more from you. Thanks for sharing.

This story is so good! It is so well written. There is a permeating sense of sadness throughout it emanating from Sookie. I was worried that she did not make her choice from a good place until towards the end. She really did plan this for everyone’s highest benefit and to ensure that no promises were broken and that she would stay with Eric.

Very sweet. I really enjoyed this. Good luck!

I would like to see this continued. It was very good and it would be better if we could get to see what happened when they got to Eric's house.

Great fic! I just adore Dracula Night, so I love how you weaved some of that in this. Loved it!

This is great fun! Wish fulfillment and sexy and fun all at once. Thanks for writing!

i loved your story and i hope you will post more stories about eric and sookie in the future!

You know, you have the perfect set-up for a full-on multi-chapter story. I can imagine the adventures Sookie and Eric could have with the Dark Prince. I hope you go with it! Nice job for your first attempt. One of these days I hope I will be brave enough to actually attempt it. I've seriously thought about it for this and the last contest, but just can't seem to get an idea to bear fruit. Again, nice job!

I really liked it! It's a very good job for your first time!

This was great, I loved it! The story was very well written and engrossing - I hope you post more stories for us in the future!

*hugs*

Shanny :)

WOw. Great first story! Your voice is really smooth-!

I must say that i enjoyed it. The dialog was good and you got you main points across in a good manor. I will say that you flip perspectives in the middle of an area without warning and for me as a writer and a reader it drives me nuts. I know how difficult it can be to stay in one persons head when writing from there perspective because you want everyone to know what the other is thinking feeling whatever but part of telling the story is making it so that you at least glean what the other is feeling by the expressions, body movements, that the main characters takes in to translate what is going on. Plus with Sookie and Eric you have the added bonus of the blood bond to help. So there you go both positive and negative to help you expand your skills. I know that i always enjoy the positive but don't get nearly enough negative to help me improve.