You. Must. Update. This. Right. Now. That's all I'm going to say, update.

( 8D )

does it has sequel? please! nice story must have sequel! i want to know what will happen!

Oh, smexy!

...

*clears throat* Anyway.

I like very much! 'Tis awesome.

Keep on writing, you two x

-WithinHerHeart

Oh wow, this is fantastic! I'm really excited to see where this story is going :)

YES! A Magnus fic! XD

C'mon Mirage, it's not all bad. I get the impression that it's mostly the personality types (and interface types? Magnus rough, Mirage gentle) that don't match, rather than 'Magnus bad, Mirage good' type of thing.

I really enjoyed this, it's interesting to see Cybertronians doing the arranged mating thing like we see occassionally on Earth.

Magnus seems like a good mech, even though he is somewhat blind to how Mirage feels. Like other males with too much power, Magnus is very caught up in his own view of things and I guess his small token of giving Mirage a single overload without seeking his own is the best he can do.

Loved the hints at how large :;cough:; Magnus is in the interface department. These things make a fangirl happy! ;-)

Sexy & very well written! I feel bad for Tracks. Keep up the good work!